Just a Man

Just a quick poem I jotted down. Was playing with the "All are equal" subject and that were "only human"

My friend, please take me in,

Let me know now of my sins,

So that I can stay but just a man,

So that I do not look down,

Upon another man to call him small,

For no one is above another.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[IndigoChild]

it strong with a good base i could almost creaet a character and story

[AWickedMoon]

Let me know if you do if love to read it! :)

[IndigoChild]

sure

[Pamela Lijing Zhou]

left a big impact. liked it a lot ;)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Darkening Shadow]

Powerful and short. Beauteous Poem!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Enigma]

Short but makes a mark. Powerful, selfless. I loved it.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you for your reviews!

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Excellent! I liked it a lot!

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou!

[Lucien Maier]

nice equal statement. Short but powerful nicely done

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou!

[Calibaster]

Great poem!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you for two awesome reviews :)

[Calibaster]

Your welcome!

[Calibaster]

That is very true.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you :)

[scripted]

all are what one is... i love this poem, it's simple but holds a lot of meaning! thank you for sharing:)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you :)