Dear Diamond Queen

A poem about my favorite season. :)

Oh you are my favorite,

The way you glisten,

The way you make them sway,

They dance when your icy voice whispers,

They dance to the howling winds song,

And dance so purely, stripped of their cloths,

Their dark skin sparkles, dusted with layer of glitter,

Oh to be able to withstand,

To stand for hours,

My bare feet buried in your white soft sand,

To feel the winter’s cold kiss.

And dance forever in your snowy lands,

To place my finger upon a rock,

And watch as the frost engulfs.

To paint the land in diamonds,

And cast a spell for all to sleep.

Dear winter you are my favorite.

Reviews

[IndigoChild]

its neat and the wording is unique and discriptive

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Rogue]

Extremely descriptive and the visuals from these words are amazing. .
Just beautiful. :)

100/100

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou :) Also thankyou for your time. X)

[Darkening Shadow]

Great Poem! very descriptive. But I'm not sure if the title fits

[AWickedMoon]

Let me know if the title fits better now I slightly changed it. I actually came up with the title “Dear Diamond” first then somehow ended up with a poem about winter...this is what ADD causes ha-ha!

[Darkening Shadow]

ADD don't we all have problem with it. LOL,, ya it works better.

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

12th line, "for ever" should be forever. You always have such good writing. I'm impressed, once again.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you, and thank you for all of your wonderful comments always appreciated. :)

[Calibaster]

Wow! that was Freakin awesome! and Terra is right, it does flow really well! Great job! :)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[Terra Hart]

Really good! It flowed very well :)
-Terra

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this...I think it captures winter wonderfully. I love looking at the snow as it sparkles. Winter is such a peaceful time.

Good Job

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

This made me cold just reading it, and I live in Florida ;-) Really well done. Makes me wish I still lived in Alaska...well...not really; but it's a nice tribute to the season I like the least.

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha!