Rain

Wrote for a contest.

You are so cruel,

To beat a person down,

When they are blue,

 

To burst a rivers bank,

Ripping the life from the land,

Yet with it you bring new life,

 

You are so calm,

To lift a person up,

And make them feel anew.

Reviews

[Enigma]

The two sides of rain, you managed to describe them nicely. Wonderful descriptions.

[Frieda P]

The complexities of rain, it can be soothing and bring us tranquility or be vindictive and bring us unrest and upheaval. Very nicely pen'd.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[Frieda P]

Good luck with the contest by the way, and my pleasure :-)

[Calibaster]

I personally have always loved rain, and was very interested to see the first side of it you portrayed. The second side however, I am much more familiar with, Great job!!! :) :) :) :)

[AWickedMoon]

Oh I deffinatly LOVE the rainstorm expecially the ones that cut power out and you have to use candles there so fun! With there big lightneing bolts.

[Calibaster]

I love those too!

[Darkening Shadow]

Great Poem! great way to describe both sides of the rain

[AWickedMoon]

:) Thank you.

[Zachary_James]

You should win the contest with this one, loved it.

[AWickedMoon]

Oh! Thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Did you win?

[AWickedMoon]

I think the contest ends april 1st. So not yet, but its not one of my best works anyways. :)

[KAOlmsted]

I'll keep my fingers crossed ;-)