Eyes

Very rough draft

Eyes are the door to people’s souls,

In them is a world you’ve never seen,

A world you’ve never been,

Unless I wish to know your soul

Only if I truly wish to know

I will look in to your soul

Through the doorway

 In your eyes

Author's Note

Let me know what you think it is a rough draft of a poem.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

"I will look into you soul" -should be 'your'

This is an age old concept, yeah? But you've managed to twist it a bit. It's almost as though you're saying, look, I know you're in there, but let me decide if I really want to take a peek. Good job there.

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you, I believe it is although I can remember where I heard about it ha-ha! Usually I avoid people’s eyes unless I really know them. Wanted it to have a mystic feel about it, not sure if ill add more to it though. :)

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure. You've conveyed your thoughts succinctly here. I like it as is.

[being me]

i've heard that no matter how a man changes his appearance there'll always be 1 thing that will give him away...his eyes...Eyes are the door to people’s souls,...true...but most of the time eyes are the hardest part to read...

[Enigma]

"I will look into your soul" My favorite line. Amazing poem.

[Calibaster]

I wish I could see all of that. Great job.

[Darkening Shadow]

Its short but packs a lot of words. Although there seems to be something missing between lines 5 & 6