You and Love

Just another cheese love poem, my inspiration being a picture well wandering on Google!

I love you with all my heart and soul

 

I wish I could buy you the world and me the moon to show how perfect we are together.

 

I wish I could buy you the sunrise and me the sunset to show how we couldn’t exist without one another.

 

I wish you could see the web I caught you in and realize what a rare catch you are.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Enigma]

Pretty. Something I imagine a love-struck guy or girl might write... are you in love?? And Ill tell myself now that its none of my business! Ha,ha! I really liked it though, its those love-struck poems that really show what is felt the first time someone falls. Awesome write.

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha! It's no problem, yes I am in love but i'm not like the mushey face sucking type! Personally i'm not very "romantic" but I do have my moments. I have been with one other person but I think it was more of learning to love him me and my ex were together for four years, so you learn to love. But that didnt workout so well, but thats ok as I found my new love and he means the world to me. :) (P.s. I'm a girl :P )

[AWickedMoon]

Oh forgot to say Thank you for the wonderful review! :)

[Enigma]

Your welcome!!
:)

[scripted]

lovely write... your emotion is very well exspressed, and i thought that your creativity behind this was great. thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! :)

[KAOlmsted]

When moon and sun are polar opposites, all hell breaks loose ;-)

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha! :)

[Darkening Shadow]

this is short but the words say a lot. Great Poem!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you. :)

[L. Catherine]

Although somewhat short, this is really sweet. It made me think of the adorable poems you read on the inside of a Valentine's Day card. Good work!

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha to hal-mark I go! Just joshing, thankyou for for review. :)

[L. Catherine]

Welcome!

[Bella Luna]

This is really sweet! My favorite part is "I wish I could buy you the sunrise and me the sunset to show how we couldn’t exist without one another." I think that's the sweetest thing you could say to someone. Great job!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you :)

[Calibaster]

Are you really in love?

Just asking.

Great job though, I had a friend who fell in love, and had her heart broken. So, yeah, I know what it is all about. That's why I wrote the poem The Golden Rose.

[AWickedMoon]

I m in love now yes. :) I also know the otherside of relationships my ex boyfriend(also my first) I thought I was in love with we were together for four years. Lets just say it wasnt a very pretty relationship. But I just celabrated a one year aniversary with my new and fantastic boyfriend and we both feel the same way. :3

[Calibaster]

That's great! Best wishes!!

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou :)

[Calibaster]

your welcome!

[Monster ^.^]

Well, isn't that lovely? What wouldn't you do for a loved one? ... with a touch of google of course :))

[AWickedMoon]

Nothing theres nothing I wouldnt do. Thank you. :)

[Megara]

great job:)

[Rogue]

Well now, who doesn't love Google? :D

The sentiment expressed here is actually very beautiful.
Nice work!

[AWickedMoon]

Thankyou :)