The World is Mine

As most of my poems the idea just popped in to my head so I quickly scrinbbled it down.

I work

And work

And work all day

But it’s ok for in my books and in my dreams,

 I live a life of fantasy

I travel far, the land is wide.

Vicious beasts, glories beasts

And Oh the wonderful feasts!

Of times of old, of times of new,

I weave a story of angels, demons,

Kings and queens,

Gods and goddesses,

The Fallen, the Ascended,

I live tortured lives,

I live touched lives,

I feel great pain, great love,

There is fear there is hope

 

In my dreams and with my pen the world is mine.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Tex]

Ahh, you could be a sister of Isak Dennison (public name of Karen Blixen) she was so loved that Kenya named a Provence after her when she left to go back home to Denmark. She felt exactly the way you do. you should read two of her books "out of Africa" and "Shadows on the grass" they can be had in the same book bound together.

Very good write.

[AWickedMoon]

Oh thankyou so much! I most certianly will go read them.

[Calibaster]

Wow, that was really good, I ecspecially liked the part about touched lives. Keep up the good work!

[Lucien Maier]

nice descriptions, you show the plight of the addicted reader/writer very well.

[scripted]

this speaks to me... it reminds me that the world is only what we make it to be, and though we live in a worldly manner our dreams and thuoghts can go beyond the stars that shine... i enjoyed the great flow this had, it was well written! yours truely Danielle (scripted)

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you!

[Uroš D. Stojanov..]

You're speaking the truth about dreams and writing. That what's I like the most about them... it really does feel like we're some sort of Gods and makers, I just love that feeling.

I do think this poem could use some rhyme and tune to in, I think it would workout even better that way. Great job, as always!

[AWickedMoon]

Thank you! It's a bit sloppy I just thought of one line and quickly scribbled it down. As you can probably tell I was going for rhyming at the beginning but then kind of lost it.