Just To Love You.

Just To Love You.

A Poem by Luna

 
I wish I could love you.
I mean truly love you.
Physically touch you,
kiss you, have you, hold
you.
 
Not this pathetic excuse for
a sentiment that should be
"love", but isn't reaching its
potential by any means.
 
Not this loving from a distance,
this lack of touch and taste, of
scent and sound, my senses going
completely unused, when they
only wish to serve your skin,
and the empty "wanting" feeling
that swims around in my bloodstream,
seeking you out in warm places,
but finding cold metal instead.
 
Most of all...I wish I could love you
and have you love me the same.
 
That way, the circle would be
complete...
 
...instead of just stopping short at the
bottom-most corner.

 

© 2008 Luna


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Wow, I'm sure this will reach quite a few people in Cyberland, hit home here as well.
Such a pure, detailed and open expression of how 'real' love transcends space and physical substance, but falls short of the life which it breeds in dreams.
Thanks for the 100/100 share!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luna

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words.



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Wow, I'm sure this will reach quite a few people in Cyberland, hit home here as well.
Such a pure, detailed and open expression of how 'real' love transcends space and physical substance, but falls short of the life which it breeds in dreams.
Thanks for the 100/100 share!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luna

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words.
I love this angel.
Your words speak my heart. Is both sad and heartwarming that we have so many of the same things going on in our lives at around the same times... like we are mirroring one another in an odd way. I love you and I love this. *kisses*

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

The 12th Circle, FL



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