The Ghost.

The Ghost.

A Poem by Luna
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Frustration at having emotions for someone.

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Why?
 
Why can't I get you out of this space?
Why can't I just make you disappear?
 
I keep waiting, with a breath of air
in my lungs that I have held there
for years.
 
Waiting for you to respond, or react,
show me something, a sign that I am
valid in your romantic little life.
 
That you feel for my existence, even
from those heavy shadows that choke
you, but yet you love to sleep in.
 
Why can't I make you just as invalid as
I feel every time you ignore me in some
new and expected way?
 
Why can't I just stop realizing you are
existing in perfect peace...
 
without me?

© 2008 Luna


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This is just... the way that, I think, everybody has felt in their life. It's an amazing song and it really reminds me of this person I knew... Well, I tried to get to know. And it really struck me in a way, cuz it says it all in this few lines written here. Very intense.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awe, my sweet Linda... *hugs* My beautiful sweet Linda. How anyone could live in peace without you is beyond me. You're an angel, with wings, from heaven. This is so perfectly written. It fits my feelings so well about 'someone' else.... I understand so perfectly. So strange how you and I can feel and experience the same emotions... it is what brought us together. I love you babygirl. Sweet sweet babygirl.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 21, 2008

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Luna
Luna

The 12th Circle, FL



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What can be said about me? You know, I find this whole "about me" section completely vain and useless. On the other hand... I suppose I could selectively ignore the "about me" label and say .. more..

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