I Could Be A Girl.

I Could Be A Girl.

A Poem by Luna

I should be asleep.
I should be curled in my bed,
refusing dreams.
 
But something tells me to stay.
Wait.
Wait like a good little girl.
Wait like a good little girl at the door.
 
Do that whole 
clasping hands,
holding-on-to-hope
thing.
 
Because being a typical,
vulnerable and normal
girl,
isn't that bad always.
 
It's not entirely without it's charms.
 
There's the softness.
The clothes.
Lipstick.
Oh God yes, lipstick.
And of course,
doe-eyed dreaming.
 
It's okay to let the sheet-metal armor slip.
No one's watching for the
dents or kinks;
no one's checking for weak spots.
No one is looking for a way in.
 
And least not yet, anyways.

© 2008 Luna


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doe-eyed dreaming...
Yes, well, there's that! I liked this very much. Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


doe-eyed dreaming...
Yes, well, there's that! I liked this very much. Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I did like this and it's probably because I can relate to it. I always hated the "girlie" stuff; I was very much the tomboy, but yet I like feeling like a woman and being treated as such. A contradiction, true, but there it is!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love the GIRLIE ones... the lipstick is just hott.

I love you honey, I love the way you write, and I love your mind.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 18, 2008

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Luna
Luna

The 12th Circle, FL



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What can be said about me? You know, I find this whole "about me" section completely vain and useless. On the other hand... I suppose I could selectively ignore the "about me" label and say .. more..

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