Chapter 1 (Messed up hero)

 

  Peter woke up before the alarm rings “Ah.. should I really go? I can pass the year easily but no, the projects & The attendance.. and even the warning calls I’ll get if I skipped. Beside... the last thing I’d want is to make this poor woman sleeping in the next room worry over me”

Peter thought of those rough words in a try to encourage himself to go to school but At School  “Why Firstly I came?”😂

Peter is sitting alone at the back. All students were away even his best friends weren’t even looking at him.

The High school always Star... Flash Thompson is having his best days picking up on Peter. So peter quietly gathered his books & walked outta the class annoyed

“Where are you going Mr. Parker?” D. Warren called

“Bathroom”

“Get back to your seat Mr. Parker or__”

“Or what... you gonna fail me!! Like hell... that’s really what I needed right now” Peter slammed the door on his way out

“Oh, Nerd Snap” Flash laughed with his gang, MJ worried about her friend while Gwen was sinking in her concerns about her childhood friend.. -That’s what she considers him now-

 Peter violently opened the door to the roof. He wore his one of type blue-red tight suit and shouted to the skies out of anger. Then he shot 2 webs to the front two building to make it like catapult. He took 3-5 steps backwards and let himself to the opposite force. Peter felt like his troubles was falling like dead parts of the rocket when it leaves to the outer space... He was thinking.. “What’s so wrong with my life, For God sake.. I’m a super hero. Have you ever seen a super hero gets his life downhill like that... I am so messed up” His mind with full of remorseful ideas.. “Give me something to hit. I need to relieve some stress” and as he flipped over a building.

 

 He saw the New Enforcers: group of 3 Men in their Modified suits that got provided by the blue man. Shocker, Ricochet, The Buffed Guy.. Ox. The three fielders were robbing a bank in the Old fashioned way -They have been out most after the death of The Green goblin.

“Everyone on the ground” < Shocker shouted firing his shock gun from his glove to the wall next to Hostages crumbling it to bits

“Pretty lady, t he money please. I don’t wanna waste this beautiful face” < Ricochet asked the clerk devilishly

And while they are gathering even The jewels from the hostages they all sensed that some unnecessary guest was on their watch from above they all looked up to the ceiling & shouted “Spiderman” 😠

“Been Busy lately, I guess!” 😎 He blinded Ox’s eyes with one of his web shot who rushed to him without considering the sequences but the wall crawler was faster he jumped above him to let him crash into a column. Ricochet -The man in the suit that made him like a rubber ball, He could dodge all of The spider’s webs & could take him on In a one-on-one hand combat- He & Shocker attacked the teenager in suit at once. As the Web swinger is jumping from one place to another dodging Shocker’s shock wave Laughing “Is that the best you can do?”, He got whacked by Ricochet who is bouncing everywhere like a crazy bouncing ball

“Yes, that’s the best we can do?” Ricochet laughed

“Darn, I’ve to take care of them fast or the civilians will be crushed” The spider Kept doing his best dodging both of his enemies attacks till the hostages cleared out

“Hey Spiderman! What’s wrong with you these days you don’t talk much. Not like always, killing us with your bad humour” Shocker grinned behind his mask

“Sorry having some issues”

“Oh yeah, we all have”

Spider sense �'�, The boy Jumped without looking, evading the Mighty power of Ox’s punch & it would be a perfect landing if it wasn’t for Ricochet that clashed into him in mid air

“Damn it, this began getting on my nerves. I can’t take them at once..”  He rolled his big white eyes to see the vault was open

 

 He remembered two or three thing about these banks’ vaults.. So he stood up aching with pain to see the Criminals back to gathering their booty.

“Hey Buddies, You really got me sleepy, Is that the best you can do.. for real!”  Shocker quickly shot him with another shock wave but Spiderman was faster blinding him with one of his web shoots, He ran into the Vault quickly to let Ricochet Quickly track him down but Spider was the first to trap him in so he closed the vault & hit some buttons then let the sleeping gas take care of the petty thief inside

“Two down one to g__” and before He finished his sentence he was blown to the sewerage under the Bank by a surprising Punch from Ox. Shocker could tear the Web on his eyes “Ah that doesn’t cut to piss me off every time”

 

 They both get down to the Sewerage to finish their enemy.

“Where did he go, Montana? I can’t see him”

“It doesn’t matter we’ll finish him Once He Show__”

(Knock knock) spider whispered in the darkness while lying on the ducts above Ox

Shocker quickly shot him to make the Debris fell on Ox to pin him down

“Hhhh, Sucker” laughed the spider

“You annoying brat” Shocker kept shooting till he got a surprise Punch right in Guts & fell down after his shock shooter stopped functioning

Spider walked “I’ve been dying to kick someone’s a*s so please be my bunch bag for today”

“Please spare me, don’t do me like you did The Goblin?”

“Huh!!” Spider looked at him with wide white eyes “What the heck?”

“You killed the Green goblin”

“No way in hell He died from his own trap”

“But everyone is low cuz they’re afraid of you. You’d kill whoever would make trouble”

“Ha? So beside all this doleful life of me, my enemies see me as a stone cold killer, wow. That’s really what I needed. But wait a min. Its good thing.. Isn’t it?”  Spider smirked “Everyone is staying low & yet you’re here Montana?” �'�

“I was wrong”

“No you weren’t, Thanks for being here Montana I really wanted to relieve some stress” Spiderman walked to him cracking his fingers

Police sirens were heard after awhile officer DeWolff & Sergeant Carter were the first to get into the ruins to see Spiderman is sitting onto some Big debris and a corpse of a half dead man beside him “Spiderman, hands up” DeWolff shouted pointing her gun

He didn’t respond “__”

“Well, wait...wait. Officers, Let me pass”  Peter recognised the voice so he quickly turned the other way “It was Capt. Stacy -the chief of police, who always hated Spiderman for interfering into the police job but he recently acknowledged him after he saved his daughter several times, he also seems to know Spiderman’s true identity-

He looked at the situation so he quietly called “Officers, min. with the man please”

“But..” DeWolff tried to object but her partner grabbed her Nicely

 Outside the bank “Leave him DeWolff, Give the man some appreciation”

“Huh! Why?! cuz he did the hard work that’s what he thinks, Most of his criminals ends up released and we got to be criticized by the majority for being useless. I don’t know what you see in that trouble maker”

“Actually my son likes him, hehehe” the man laughed secretly

 

  Inside the Bank

“Are you okay Kid?”

“Of course why shouldn’t I be Okay? But that depends on whom you ask. I took care of the enforcers, saved the hostages, kept the money good... Yes everything is okay”

“Wow. What happened to Montana? He seems like he was run over by a train”

“I happened”

“Why! Rough day in school, bad day in work. All of us have those things but that doesn’t make us get outta the road. That’s what you taught me...Spiderman”

The boy shrunk more & trembled behind his mask

“I didn’t know what I did. For a moment I blacked out. Next moment, He was like this. Do you know what he told me..

The villains are low not because they are scheming something.. It’s because of me”

“!!!”

“Cuz I killed The Green Goblin” He said

“You didn’t kill him”

“Tell that to him, to his son or to the Big Blabber outside calling me Menace all the day. Actually I’m done”

“Spiderman”

“I’m taking time off”

“Spiderman you can’t do this. Super villains are on the loose. We need you. The city needs you”

“I’m sorry; I need to regroup my thoughts”

The Web swinger walked out in agony & (whip whip) He swung over the building & disappeared.

 

Author's Note

How was it as a beginning? Excuse my mistakes.
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Reviews

[Stephanie M]

Cool! I like your new twist on the Spiderman series. What would happen if Spiderman went dark.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good opening chapter. I liked the energy of this chapter. Strong characters and good story line. Thank you Tarek for sharing the amazing opening chapter.
Coyote