Newcomers

Newcomers

A Chapter by A.Tarek

  Regis was sucked away, while Oikawa was left in charge of hosting the newcomers.. How will Oikawa show his hospitality and his deal with K

 

3 years later,

    Group of 6 -3 men & 3 girls.. all round 21 to 25 years old except a 17 years old girl- Before their very, eyes lies a vast wasteland Where nothing but ruins.

“Where are we?-How we got here?” the same old question they asked

  And while they are wondering in confusion, A vicious beast appeared from nowhere attacked them brutally. The youngest girl screamed loudly hiding behind her Sister 😱😭

One man Ran away while the 2 others tried to block the monster’s way.

 The girls tried to run to a hideout in some building... the monster blew the 2 Men with the back of his big Claw, Sending them injured & rummaged out to the girls. 

 

  They began trembling & screaming in fear but out of blue the monster got sliced in half as a blonde man in dashing clothes and princely aura showed from behind, killed the monster with his long black rusty sword

He paced to them in concern “Are you Okay?”

“Who are you?” A tall girl with short pink hair as in pixy hairstyle -wearing black tight shirt & sexy hot short- asked violently cuz of her aggressive personality

He smiled nicely 😇 �"That’s what they thought- �'� & said “let’s get the injured”


   After he treated the injured by primitively methods

The girl asked “Who are you?”

“What’s your name, my dear?”

“Machi Yamamura”

He looked to the Sisters. The older 23 years old was wearing white beautiful dress fitting her short brown hair & brown eyes while the younger one wearing her grey-beige school uniform

The older one said” Maeda & that’s my younger sister Shiori Kasamura. Thanks for saving us”

“Oh welcome, my name is Oikawa” the man grinned devilishly

“You all met K, right?..”

“What did he mean by second chance?”

Don’t bother. He is a demon... If you want to get out of this place, tell me. You have till tomorrow to answer”

 

 

   At the night the two injured woke up to see a campfire & food

They knew what happened after they went unconscious

One of them said my name is” Takahashi Koizora. We all get deceived K, right?” The other man sighed while putting on his glasses “What’s the big deal?  After all we wanted to end our lives.. Strangely even now I’m not sure if we’re really alive”

The pink head poked his injured leg

“Ahh, you crazy b***h” screamed the man

“So you’re alive.. I really don’t care about anything even if we get slaughtered. It doesn’t matter”

Shiori shrunk more behind her sister “Nee-chan, I’m scared”

“Don’t worry. Oikawa-san can help us, I guess”

 

  Next morning -It wasn’t really morning, as the sun never rises in that place the dawn was like dusk & the dusk was like the dawn.. both dusty and sough in darkness- Oikawa came from far in his best appearance -almighty-. Koizora thanked him

He smiled slyly “you want to get out of here. Follow me”

  The group walked hesitantly behind the Stranger till he took them to a place like a big square full of evil aura

Maeda leaned to the Pink haired “Should we be here?”

“Are you afraid? If you were, you shouldn’t kill yourself in the first place” Maeda looked down in shame

Machi sighed “Don’t be sad. It’s just me; I’m just frustrated that I killed myself for something useless. You’re suspicious about that blond guy too. He didn’t say much... but we don’t have much choices beside we don’t have anything to lose”

“We’re here” Oikawa said

“What.. where are we Oikawa-san?”  Takahashi said

  The other pessimistic man Said with tense “what do you mean we’re here, Mysterious sword master?” he mocked him

“That’s right Kensuko Kagiama, He wasn’t talking to you” A familiar Voice called from behind.. They all turned to see the demon that brought them here

“You deceived us?” Koizora called pathetically

Oikawa walked quietly to stand beside K floating in mid air

“You B*****d” Machi shouted

Kensuko gritted his teeth “... I knew it. We shouldn’t trust that a*****e”


   Some monsters closed in slowly after they emerged from the darkness

Takahashi tried to escape from one opening but he got slashed in a sec.

Maeda shuddered calling “Oikawa-san, why are you doing this?”


 The man answered while grinning “It’s a part of my deal.. I’ve to kill you to acquire your power while K can have his little fun... You really are the most foolish, naive group I ever devoured, Hahaha”

Koizora ran as crazy man to get easily slaughtered by a Monster,

Shiori tried to clench to her sister’s dress but she couldn’t cuz of her trembling hands cuz of fear, one monster tried to Get Machi but The tall sharp looking man with short hair wearing his spectacles barely managed to block the monster’s attack with the stick he previously picked up... “Get out of here, quickly”

“To where? Dumbass”

“Get in this building, crazy b***h”

Maeda grabbed Machi & went in.. calling for her sister. Kensuko ran to the building waving to the little girl to get in but she tripped over a stone & fell on the ground... And as one of the clashing monsters was about to bounce on her.  

  A Black Worm hole opened up in the Sky & something fell like a meteor from the Sky, All the monsters converged to the thing & in a mere sec. All the monster were slaughtered, A Man Stood in the middle of the corpses and began brutally ripping the other monsters manically with his bare hands. He’d bounce on one monster biting his neck or slitting his throat. It wasn’t some kind of sorcery or Fantastic martial artist, It was just Brute action. 

  

   The man -in Old clothes, wearing a torn cape covering his head & most of his body- with long black messy hair & narrow black Murderous eyes lurking with anger- shouted  

     “Run From Me K, RUN”

 

  K disappeared in thin air sensing a strange feeling he forgot years ago, it was fear.

  Oikawa tried to run from the unknown danger but he felt his body tied and being swept to the monster’s direction he turned screaming as the man Raised his hand �' Oikawa Screamed “Let me go Let me Go, Who are you?”  As his body got pinned in mid air being brought to the man’s feet

“It’s me, Ketsune”

“Huh? Who?... HOW?” gulped Oikawa recognizing that voice

   “Humans are selfish being. Those who put more import on the thorn under one’s own nail.. than on the countless dying others. That’s A human being, That’s why I cut myself being a One..”

“REGIS !! HOW ? Why Now?”

 “Why now !?!  It’s SIMPLE:  Bad deeds lead to bad Karma

  Regis slowly choked his neck till he ripped his Adam’s apple out of his throat with just one hand

He looked up.. “Come Out K”


  The Grey haired short Demon appeared floating on air smirking

“So it’s really you, you startled me for a sec. How did you come back?”

“You should know, after you throw me in this Labyrinth, I killed everyone, every being been devoured by me till I reached the top”

“No man reached the Top”

Regis silently Glared at him after his eyes went completely Black 🎃

K Shivered for a sec.  “you stopped being a human, you sucked the blood of a monster, Hhhhh” snickered the demon

“Go K, Tell the OTHERS. Regis Cleared the Tower

“... You?” K growled in anger

“Well, Then. I’ve grown Bored of this conversation, Lets continue from where we Left...” Regis quickly tried to throw him with some kind of blue-black flame that he ignited from his hand, but K barely managed to escape.


  

  The Monster turned, the girls shivered in fear, 

He was still in this beast mode trying to devour them but suddenly he glimpsed The little one Shiori,... The image of his sister flash-backed in his head, He walked by them as he was lost in his own despairs.


 

  K entered a place where other 5 People were sitting in the darkness round a table... They were all Demons of different shapes & sizes.

K walked towards one of them as his side was burnt from Regis’ flames “Help... help me R”

R shoved him away while another is laughing

K shouted “What are you laughing about A, you b*****d?”

“Hahaha, it’s ironic that you got hurt from your toys. K you fool you look pale, did you get intimidated? Hahaha”

“He.. came back from the black hole”

“A Labyrinth Survivor?!” R exclaimed

“No ordinary Monster.. He acquired the will of fire”

  The monsters looked at him strangely “Hahaha, Don’t be naive No one drawn that sword and survived it’s curse ...”

“Except One”  A said in bit sadness

The monsters looked to their boss in fear who was sitting on the King’s Chair and drawn away outta the room

 



© 2018 A.Tarek


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I like the plot and your characters are interesting. But, there are some inconsistencies that take away from your writing. As I read it, I felt like the emojis were distracting and unneeded. I had to pause to redirect my attention back to the actual plot. Overall, I really like your idea and the direction you're headed but I do think that you have a few things to master in your writing so that you can keep that grip on your readers from start to finish. Keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens with everyone in the next chapter!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.Tarek

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, happy to read your notes.
Keep guiding me well 😇
Ah, no emojis.... read more



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That was a lot fun to read. I can't wait to read more. Just wondering, why do you refer to some of your characters with a capital letter?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.Tarek

6 Years Ago

No, it doesn't have any meaning just a habit of mine..
Just forgive my bad editing 😂
I'm looking forward to next chapter and I want to see where their powers lead them. Good job, the main plot is definitely interesting and there is a kind of sub-plot that makes it even better.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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thalia

6 Years Ago

Is it going to be 3 chapters?! Oh no hahahah
A.Tarek

6 Years Ago

3 !!
I don't write so short.. My mind is always in a whirl..
Its going to be 7 chapte.. read more
thalia

6 Years Ago

Oh good then. It's going to be so cool👍
I like the plot and your characters are interesting. But, there are some inconsistencies that take away from your writing. As I read it, I felt like the emojis were distracting and unneeded. I had to pause to redirect my attention back to the actual plot. Overall, I really like your idea and the direction you're headed but I do think that you have a few things to master in your writing so that you can keep that grip on your readers from start to finish. Keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens with everyone in the next chapter!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.Tarek

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, happy to read your notes.
Keep guiding me well 😇
Ah, no emojis.... read more
Who are these monsters and what is the will of fire, K talked about?
Stay tuned for the next chapter.. Regis leads the pack

Ignore my spelling mistakes, I rarely find the time to edit my chapters.. but thank you for reviewing, it really supports me
hope you enjoy your time reading

Posted 6 Years Ago



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