Chapter 2 - The Doors of terror

The bar keeper was odd... This doors are even odd, there is something special about them....

    It was a dark hole, beyond it was just darkness, I went home to get my lantern. 

    

    "There was a horrible putrid smell coming out of that hole, maybe I might bring a mask as well." - I wondered to myself.

   

     Once I get all my stuff, I head back to the stairs, and what a find? the doors closed with 5 chains and 3 huge lockers connecting each chain to make it more secure then the gates of the village, 3 big men standing with hammers in their hands... 

   "Man this is freaky, what am I suppose to do now? Well... I guess the best I can do is come back tomorrow morning before they can see me, open the doors and run inside, hehe this is going to be fun... If I actually do it of course...."  

   

    "Can I help you, sir?" - says the bar keeper standing behind me.

    My blood froze; I was being chased since the beginning... oh man, what am I suppose to do now? - "ohhhh I know!" - I ran towards to the forest and hide myself in some cavity under a tree. Heavy steps walk by where I safely hide, my spine freezes while I see his feet passing by... slowly, gets further and further away from me, and when I see that the right moment as come, I jump off the hole and run to the police office. 

    "Officer! Officer! I have got a request for you!" - I say to the police officer

   The police officer is called John, He is tall, a bit fat, and he has a tattoo of a skull smiling in his right arm, he has a huge mustache and small eye brows, everyone laugh at him because he looks silly.  

    "Tell me then, what do you want? Don't you see that I am busy right now? To many work to do, To many bodies missing..."

    Bodies missing? More of them? ohh great and I thought this day would go better once I asked the police for help. Everything seemed to go wrong today, first the people in the bar, specially the bar keeper, then the doors in the back of the bar go locked with chains so no-one can open them, and now.... this, oh man, life of inspector is just to hard to me. 

    "Chadson? I need a favor from you" - said the police officer 

    "Sure what is it?"

    "I need you to interview the people in the village to see if they have seen any suspicious actions going on lately..." - he stopped for a while - "I heard about the incident in the bar this morning, are you alright?" 

   "Yeah! I am alright, no need to worry, but I have a favor to ask as well. Could you go to the bar and check those doors in the background for me please?"

   "Sure!" - He walks towards to the door grabs his gun, and shuts the door.

   "Oh what a drag, now I have to interview people? That is just great..." - speaking to myself but then a loud scream coming from outside grabbed my attention - "What is going on?" - I ask the people around.

    A woman walks slowly to me grabs my hand and says:

    "Please save me Husband!" - She cries - "He's missing since yesterday, he went to the bar and he never came back." 

    

    I ran fast to catch up with the police officer but... I could find him... Suddenly, I hear the loud noise of the doors in the background of the bar open and close.... I ran to see what was going on... and I found half an arm lying on the floor with the tattoo of a skull; smiling.... 

   

Author's Note

OMG! an arm in the floor? That arm could be from whom?

Reviews

[Blake]

Before I tell you what I thought, make sure you change "but...I could find him.." to "but...I couldn't find him.."* lol.
This chapter was great. Nice ending, too. Good way to make the reader want to read the next chapter. Congrats again! lol

[Some Random Person.]

Great chapter. There were still some grammar mistakes like "My blood froze, I was being chased since the beginning..." instead of the comma, put a semicolon. mostly just small mistakes, but they're still mistakes. Good chapter, nonetheless.

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh, wow! That scared me and made me want to read more! :) I can't wait to read more! :P

~Lizzard~