PITTER PATTER PITTER PATTER

RAIN DROPS OR HEART BEATS

Woke up this morning to the pitter patter of raindrops

Thought it was your heart beating next to mine

But alas, it was only the raindrops beating on my window sill

That had given me false hope of your presence

When I reached out you weren't there

So sad ..So sad ..So sad

Pitter patter …Pitter patter…Pitter patter …………

Reviews

[Patricia Blackie]

This poem is heart breaking and beautiful :)
I thought being called 'pitter patter' would mean it was a bit cliche but I was proved totally wrong it's lovely :)
I especially like: 'when I reached out you weren't there - So sad.. So sad.. So sad'
'So sad' repeated sounds like rain drops :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Consistent thoughts lead the reader to think themselves, well done, good read.