"JUST LIKE YOU"

JUST A LIL PROSE ABOUT SOME FLOWERS AND A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN

I went out into my garden
To pick a flower just for you.
There where poppies, roses, daffodills
And lillies that were blue.

Then I saw some special ones
They really caught my eye.
Glad I took a second look
For I almost walked right by.

They bloomed so many colors
Like a rainbow they did flow.
Don't know what kind there were
For their name I did not know.

But the beauty of their pedals
Was such a visual delight.
And odor of their bloosoms
Did spure these words I write.

I really wanted to show you
How much you mean to me.
So when I saw these flowers
This poem came to me

They have so much color
And so much beauty too
So now I'll have name them
           Think I'll call them “ Just Like You'             

Reviews

[Jacqueline Cousteau]

So now I see you are a poet - I knew you wrote.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work. Very fluid, florid write.

[StarSandwich]

:D Hehe, awh this is so loving, flowers that represent people, I think every one is a flower there just different types. Peoples personality reflects on the color and shape of the flower itself :D

[Tasha]

I loved this, it was beautiful.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Raven Starhawk]

Beautiful. Your words reach inside and caress every fiber of my being.