LET ME BE YOUR DREAM

LET ME BE YOUR DREAM

A Poem by DONALD EISSLER
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Just taking my love lady on a Dream

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 What a beautiful picture you are to me ... Like something out of a story book...Can I be your Knight ? Even if you have to fake it just a little… Can you be my damsel in distress?
  For I do have a Unicorn, his name is Dream... We can ride him over a rainbow...he will take us to the land of bliss...There willows never weep and my words whispered to you will be like a robins song in springtime to your ears....We can make love upon a cloud of fluffy white, while Dream grazes in a field of bonnie four leaf clover... waiting to take us again, back to reality ... Oh!! But what a memory we will have  riding on a dream, together, to our own land of bliss...
Your Dream Maker
The Tarnished Knight

© 2011 DONALD EISSLER


Author's Note

DONALD EISSLER
Ok a bit silly but bet yu would like to come along lol

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A wonderful piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A romantic idea conceived by a brilliant knight. In some way, shape or form everyone dreams of meeting that special someone. And when you think you found the one reality becomes more like a sweet dream.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice piece, Donald. I think it needs some better formatting, and I think the punch will be so much better. That's my opinion anyway, but I got the message loud and clear. Just a dreamy, stunning piece of work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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DONALD EISSLER
DONALD EISSLER

MOORPARK, CA



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Originally from NY but lived in Ca. for last 40 + yrs more..

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