TELL HER THAT YOU LOVE HER

Tell her what you really feel ...or there may be a Tarnished Knight in her future ..heheehe

 

The words of “I love you,”

Come flowing from my lips.

What away to start the day,

In this loving partnership.

Just want to tell you,

How you changed my life.

Never been this happy,

Since you said you'd be my wife.

You have made me see,

What I've never seen before.

For loving you is easy,

My heart you make it soar.

I was always lost,

No direction could I find.

Going to hell in a hurry.

Now I've left that all behind.

I wake up in the morning,

You cuddled by my side.

Oh how I thank the lord,

That you agreed to be my bride.

Your smile starts my day.

Your smile ends my night.

My heart pumps with passion

Whenever your insight.

I hope you really know,

How much you mean to me.

I'll always want you by my side

For now and through eternity.

Author's Note

Honesty is the best policy on here but if you think it sucks don't tell me lol Just The Tarnished Knight being the court jester hehe

Reviews

[brenda]

aaaaw!!! this is lovely love it !:)

[frozensakura]

great poem and i loved the structure.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Just stunning on the whole.

[Dreamer]

Yes Mr tarnished knight, i sense you're quite the funny one:) Thats great, keep laughing and making those around you laugh, you'll all live longer because of it. Well, abt the poem. i like the piece particularly because of the message. Not many ppl portary love like this anymore. I appreciate it. :)

[WordShifter]

How beautiful life can be when touched by love. This is beautiful thank you for sharing. With much Aloha, Ginger

[Tasha]

This was really pretty, I liked how you structured it and how you started it. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[arlene krilovich]

its very nice , we all make mistakes.lol

[Rene Velez]

nice thoughtful endearing write, "direction" is missing the E, and "That you agreed to my bride". I think is missing "BE"...I make mistakes to, LOL