THE VERBAL CONFRONTATION

Part three of Temper saga the verbal confrontaion between the tempter and the Lords Warrior Bride

The Tempter got very angry

When rejected by His Warrior Bride

So he slipped back into Hades

But he wasn't there to hide.

There was a terrible rumble

Fire came strewing up from earth,

Even His Warrior Bride

Thought hell was giving birth!

Then a voice was heard

Came from the depths of hell.

"I will make you pay

If my advances you repel."

His Warrior Bride stood steady

Spoke with a sword still in hand.

"I was sent by the Lord

To banish you from His land."

"You are such a fool."

Spoke the tempter from his lair.

"I can give anything you want,

I am a jealousy concessionaire."

His Warrior Bride never flinched.

Said, as she slowly shook her head.

“He gives us eternal life,

You just take their souls instead."

"I give them what they ask for."

Said the tempter with a smirk.

"Then I can take their souls,

That’s just the way It works."

"Well I'm here to tell you

That you better go and hide.

You'll take no more souls" she said

"While I'm His Warrior Bride."

The tempter rolled back his head

Then came out a mighty roar

Like a thousand screaming souls

Saying there is going to be a war..

 

to be continued

Author's Note

may have to read the the orginal Tempter then The Tempter and His warrior Bride to follow what is happening enjoy all

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Blistering and succinct. I like this.

[Kat Collins]

Story through a poem...like Beowulf...a classic epic of good and evil. I hope good wins! Intriguing...

[Donna Lorenz]

You have me hooked on this one. Fascinating reads.

[Raven Starhawk]

Another lovely read though with touches of mystery that pull me in for a closer look.

[WordShifter]

Very good Don, The Warrior Bride has my vote. Behold, I have given you authority to tread on serpents and scorpions, and over ALL the power of the enemy, and nothing will injure you. Luke 10: 19

[brenda]

cpoincidence that i just read a book talking about the same thing it kinda went like this though and the book is called the eys of the oracle :) hum nice poem :)

[StarSandwich]

This is getting more and more interesting the whole tempter and warrior bride story. Like how you tell it. The tempter is jealous though :)

[Dreamer]

This is great! I love this "you'll take no more souls" she said "while i'm His warrior Bride" I'm cheering on the warrior Bride. Im not really a fan of rhyme but it is appropriate here. It helps by drawing the reader in. Nice work, please send me the continuation.

[Fairy Willow]

Enjoyed this a lot Donald, good to read this! Look forward to reading more :)