OUR KISS AND LAST EMBRACE

Thinking about that last kiss and embrace two lover shared

 

Well it's 5 am in the morning.

It's just my keyboard ,dog and me.

The rooster is still sleeping.

Good!! please  just let him be..
.

The owls have retired.

As the moon starts to fade.

No more coyotes yelping.

As night and daylight trade.

Then I opened up this magic box .

A smile comes across my face.

A message from a pretty lady .

Appears in my visual space.

A “how are you this morning?”

Starts her words of love.

Said that she misses me .

I'm what she dreaming of..

Wish we were together .

For more than just a day.

Just want to ask you this.

“You coming back my way?”

Two weeks was a long time.

But yet not so long at all.

Says she really cares for me.

I have taken down her wall.

Can it be that I have found .

The one I’m looking for?

Must admit she made this Knight,

Grave for even more .

I hear that damn ole rooster .

Yes he's finally come alive.

Even my dogs ears pop up.

As other life it starts to thrive.

Now the Sun breaks the sky,

Off in the horizon East.

It's like a rising Phoenix.

The night time it has ceased.

My coffee cup is empty now.

But I have a smile upon my face.

For it's you that I’m thinking of

And our kiss and last embrace .

Author's Note

all comments welcomed

Reviews

[It Broke Me]

I like the emotion. The words really come alive =)

[Barbara Lynne]

A last embrace can be so sad...but you have put a smile upon my face also...beautiful Don

[WordShifter]

Don, You sure can paint a lovely picture with words. Has tenderness and explosions of color. Your mind amazes me, keep writing like this you are going to have a large collection of badges

[Kenneth The Poet]

Got to love that early morning period that only exists for the light sleepers.

[SINDE]

Nice piece! I felt it word after word. It felt so real. The diction also brings out the emotions and that is remarkable.Nice piece! I felt it word after word. It felt so real. The diction also brings out the emotions and that is remarkable.

[light and ashes]

I really love this. Its sweet with the sting of missing that specail someone.

[Vestigial Appendage]

Nicely played. Emotional content is strong. Good work.

[Raven Starhawk]

A lovely read that carried my heart away.

[StarSandwich]

This Is cute, I also have a rooster - FINCH. but hes at my Nan's.. its a rather heroic story how I came to have him. But anyways. This is a very delightful poem. Waking up before 5, just to have a conversation her way? am I right. Its sweet. Coffee is much better then tea as always... Its a nice poem. I can picture the setting and the early morning 'as night and daylight trade' places. Hehee see what I did there. Loved It As Usual.