NOW THAT REALLY MADE YOU CRY

Love and respect must go together.. Read on and see what REALLY MADE HER CRY

“NOW THAT REALLY MAKES YOU CRY”

 

Your words are so splendid

They come right from your heart.

Your smile is so enticing.

I was attracted from the start.

 

We talked and we laughed.

Over coffee we did speak

A little about everything .

Into both lives we did peek.

 

My heart skipped a beat ,

When you touched my hand.

Your aura flowed around me.

This will not be a one night stand.

 

We sat and we giggled,

Exploring each other psych.

Time never really mattered.

As we absorbed every little bite.

 

Ask if you would join me

For a drink or maybe two.

There was no hesitation as you said.

“Yes!! I would love to go with you.”

 

We ordered from the waiter.

He thinking we be kinda neat.

Looked at me and mimed .

“This one you better keep.”

 

I was so very proud

As we walked arm and arm.

Everyone looked at us

They were all so very charmed.

 

We spent hours of that night

Just chatting in your car.

Had to hold myself back.

Did not want to go to far.

 

Wanted you to know

That I enjoyed your company.

Did not want to ruin that.

Your respect, meant that much to me.

 

We said our good byes,

With anticipation growing strong.

Saying I would call you.

You knew that all along.

 

Made sure I called you .

To see if you made home.

Hoping that you did.

And that you went home alone.

 

We exchanged words,

With no hesitancy at all.

Said how much we like the other.

And the time is was a ball.

 

We have been together now.

Going now on almost forty years..

But you still get the thrill,

When I whisper in your ear.

 

Saying that I love you,

Still brings a tear to your eye.

Saying that I respect you

Now that really makes you cry.

tk

Reviews

[Donna Lorenz]

What a lovely story! One that has been repeated generation after generation. I enjoyed it very much and certainly don't want to make you cry!

[sugar]

awwww :(

[WordShifter]

It really makes me cry! You really know how to make a lady cry!

[Kat Collins]

Sweetly romantic...that is a love that we all desire. To treasure for years upon years.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love this one.

[Rene Velez]

what a romantic, beautiful and heartfelt Don, nice one....

[Vestigial Appendage]

Once again, you have a very good sense for romance.
Nice poem.

[M.D]

As far as I know, russian poets sometimes finish off with 6 lines the last stanza to sort of make a conclusion ^^, with that I would suggest to add understanding into "love, respect". As in my opinion, any couple in harmony would also need "understanding". =) in other aspects poem is great and deserves respect.

[StarSandwich]

Awh, So romantic. I can feel the love hear, from the moment you met to how you knew she was a keeper, its very sweet and touching. The feelings are more then words there described though the things she does her smile ow she reacts to that whisper in her ears. :)