RIDING MY DREAM

Ride your Dream to the end no matter what other may say ....ride ride ride.......

 

RIDING MY DREAM

I have unicorn named Dream.

His coat is snowflake white.

We ride upon a rainbow

Till the daylight turns to night.

Some say I am just a dreamer.

That he too is just a dream.

There is no such thing as a unicorn.

Only what I make him seem.

Then how come I can fly,

Touching rainbows as I go.

Resting on wispy clouds,

Looking down on life below.

You may not believe

The things I say I do.

Maybe It's because

You have no faith in you.

Many times I heard them laugh

As I set about my task.

Never did they take the time

To question why or even ask.

Yes, I may be a dreamer

In what is not so understood.

Never have I turned my back.

Something that I never would.

So if you have dream,

Let no one criticize.

It's you that must believe in it

Not through others eyes.

So saddle up your Dream.

And ride it to the end.

I am sure that you will find

You'll never have a better friend .

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Just beautiful.

[Rene Velez]

pretty cool scribe Sir Donald, magical in all it's glory...

[Donna Lorenz]

Oh you are a charmer you dreamer. Ride over those clouds dear man and in the end that dream just may be true! Once again a creative write.

[Fairy Willow]

I absolutely adore this! Its descriptive and has charm, charisma, elegance. Perfectly written. I love love love it. :)

[brenda]

aaaaw!!! love this inspiring message !:p

[Christina May Shanaberg]

We ride upon A rainbow
That he, TOO, is just a dream

You don't, actually, have a unicorn; do you?! LOL!!

I really liked

So saddle up your Dream.
And ride it to the end.

Who cares what anyone feels about your dreams, because they are "your" dreams. You wrote it quite well, with a little touch a fantasy. We tend to lose our fantasy with age and that's a shame. I dreamed of being a writer, but wait a minute I am!