THE TEMPTER AND THE WARRIOR BRIDE

Continuing the war against good and evil 2ND part of Tempter when comes face to face with His Warrior Bride

The tempter was an Angel, Who had fallen out of Grace. Fell down from the heavens, Banned to Hades in disgrace.   He's the lord of the underworld, And for those who don't believe, They're sent to him for eternity, Then they can never leave.   The tempter rose from Hades, Played havoc on the land. Devastated man and beast, Like only the tempter can.   The Lord looked from his rampart Saw the devastation of that day. He shouted out in anger, Tempter, I'm going make you pay!   He told his mighty warrior. Who was right there by his side. You go hunt that tempter down.  For you are my warrior bride.   She bowed down before him, Clad in a grown of silk and gold. Got the blessing from Her Lord As there was a battle to unfold.   There was a flash of lightning, Then a rumble shook the ground. It was the Mighty Warrior . For the tempter she had found!   The tempter showed his angry face As the princess drew her sword. He just threw back his head Then let out a mighty roar.   You think you are the Warrior Bride? He said with much distaste. I do believe that your faith Is very much displaced!   I can assure riches Beyond your very dreams. Come and see what I can do For I will be the new regime.   Do not try and temp me. I will never take your bribe There is nothing you can offer I shall never be your bride'   Who will win this battle The tempter or the bride? Is it true what the tempter says?

            Or has he only lied?

TK

Reviews

[StarSandwich]

:) Whaaa! I'm getting the story in my head mind blowing and inspirational ;) Loved it. Hehe I loved the last verse sums it up completely :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice piece of work. I like the story style of this poem. It's vivid, uncompromising, and inspiring.

[Donna Lorenz]

YOU ARE SUCH A CREATIVE WRITER. YOUR MIND NEVER CEASES TO AMAZE ME!

[DONALD EISSLER]

THANKS EVERY ONE FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND COMMENT ON THIS... THERE IS MORE TO COME FROM THE TEMPTER VS HIS WARRIOR BRIDE
TK

[WordShifter]

Truly brilliant, Oh! how you write a picture with words. Worth more than 100 points. Thanks for sharing. Aloha, Ginger

[Brittany W]

This really told a story, you did a great job at writing, nice penning. Keep up the good work.

[Rene Velez]

good work and great story, interesting work for sure...