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Look towards the sky

watch it fly by

to the center of the earth

and everything is fine

set up by design

all in good time

what the moon doesn't show

the sun will rhyme

its destiny mine

further than my prime

fire still lives

somewhere inside.

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Positive expression of unknowable forces that call us forth to an unknown destiny.
I like to title after writing,by choosing a word, phrase, or feeling conveyed by the poem. I would have opted for "DESTINY MINE"
Love this!
Poetry reveals our inner workings, as a snapshot reveals our outer image. Each is a portrait of a single moment in time. You my friend are beautyfull to the core.

[Aramey]

Thank you so very much and I'm glad you enjoyed and that is an excellent idea for titles. Somehow they seem to be the most difficult to come up with in the poem.

[Chris]

I like the flow and the aftertaste this leaves.

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is a short book length story
all in a few words.
Excellent command of the language.

Thank you ,
---- John

[Kyle]

This is well done. I am impressed by the many, many thoughts and ideas all encompassed in so few words.