little footprints

little footprints

A Poem by Aramey
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A poem for my daughter- Ava Marie

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Your little footprints in my heart,
I pray that we shall never part
like an angels wing wrapped around,
I shall guide you to safe ground

Nothing in the world could take away
the love I have for you each day
I will always be with you near or far
I will always be with you, where ever you are.

Your little fingers, your little toes
your itty-bitty, little nose
no words could describe
no poet, nor prose.

The most precious thing that God ever created
is love for a child, never debated
If your faith in that begins to wear
Look into your heart, I'll always be there.











 

© 2011 Aramey


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A mother's love for a child, is for me, a natural, powerful and utterly beautiful instinct which has given the human race it's life force. I absolutely love the simplicity of your piece, and the gentle description you use, which is highly appropriate when describing such a beautiful and complex relationship. Your metaphor of little footprints in your heart is breathtaking, and sets the reader up nicely for the journey ahead.

The journey is light and airy, you have somehow created space "between the words' in each line, and I liked that space to reflect on the theme. This ambling along is halted though by the impact of the last line in the final stanza. The effect is immense, and you set up your key idea perfectly. No answer will be the same of course but the question posed, who among us, when faced with life's dramas, looks inside their heart for an answer? Simply beautiful writing and very soulful indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the detailed review! This is very encouraging and I appreciate it so much, glad you en.. read more



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Wow, the love you bare is tremendous that you shown for your daughter in such deep affection...such beautiful emotions...I truly enjoy your artistry. Lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The first and the second paragraph I am already thinking of a baby, until have I reached the third, it is about the angel, this is beautiful written piece with full of honesty and love. Thanks for sharing this stunning work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

Than you for taking time out to comment on my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Thank you A Ramey, for sharing this. It is divine. You are truly gifted,in many ways.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you Valormore for your kind comments :) It's an honor to have you stop by and read some of my .. read more
VALORMORE DE PLUME

11 Years Ago

The pleasure is mine Aramey
A mother's love for a child, is for me, a natural, powerful and utterly beautiful instinct which has given the human race it's life force. I absolutely love the simplicity of your piece, and the gentle description you use, which is highly appropriate when describing such a beautiful and complex relationship. Your metaphor of little footprints in your heart is breathtaking, and sets the reader up nicely for the journey ahead.

The journey is light and airy, you have somehow created space "between the words' in each line, and I liked that space to reflect on the theme. This ambling along is halted though by the impact of the last line in the final stanza. The effect is immense, and you set up your key idea perfectly. No answer will be the same of course but the question posed, who among us, when faced with life's dramas, looks inside their heart for an answer? Simply beautiful writing and very soulful indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the detailed review! This is very encouraging and I appreciate it so much, glad you en.. read more
I can feel my love for my children through the mirror of your wonderful poem.
Congratulations,Aramey!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
This is beautifully done. What a lovely tribute!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment :) I think the unbreakable bond between a sane mother and her daughter is .. read more
Very, endearingly profound poem of one's love for their child, beautifully crafted,
that pierces the readers heart with such tenderness the eloquent imagery your words
portrayed in this write. very sweet, simply a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

This one will one day be framed for my daughter, the honor is mine that people enjoy reading my work.. read more
ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

Yes, I was going to suggest that you get this poem framed. You're quite welcome :)!
Steve

11 Years Ago

I agree. I was blessed with a wonderful mom. It's apparent your daughter was as well. She is .. read more
A sweet little poem . An enjoyable read...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aramey

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
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Awe, so precious and wonderful.
Enjoyed this, wonderful writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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