Object of His Rage

Object of His Rage

A Poem by Aramey
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just a spur of the moment poem

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Somehow you will manage
somehow you'll be free
each day I find myself
telling me these things

His claws dig deeper
when I try to move away
bleeding and broken,
I just don't want to stay

To him I am nothing more
than a singing bird to cage
nothing but an object
the object of his rage.

© 2011 Aramey


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Such a powerful and inspiring write! The rhyming scheme is perfect, the words are beautiful! Everything is amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is powerful!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How about "someday you'll be free.". Instead of the line somehow you'll be free?

Just a thought. I like this though. It is intense and sad too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aramey
Aramey

Pensacola, FL



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