Standstill

Intuition, a whisper, when we are most blind,
telling the secrets to minds so inclined
to listen... can you hear it's subtle chime?
or do you push it aside and favor silence, this time.

The winds of change are blowing, as they often do,
a clever adversary for those who plan to stand glued,
and as the ocean tides rise to meet, faithfully ensue,
for those who choose the ignorance of a standstill colored hue. 

Reviews

[B-poet]

Loved the degree of eloquence you've displayed here within this fine write. Great work. A riveting write & read. :)

[Aramey]

Thank you :) I was attempting to make this one a bit shorter, sometimes it seems the short ones have a little more strength.

[Everett DeValle]

Deep...I know I have to say thing intelligent...but I honestly get floored when I read superb poetry...the emotions and the reflections in life. Wonderful.

[Aramey]

Thank you :) I was wondering how this one would come across, and I will certainly take floored as a compliment :)

[Everett DeValle]

I enjoyed the couplets...but more so the emotional content...lol sorry, um, I do get stuck reading lovely poetry...that's just me...I look forward to reading more of your poems, and leave better reviews. :)