Glow

Glow,
the aftermath of twin souls
shedding barriers, flesh to flesh
daydreams of how energy and passion mesh.

His breath passing my freckles, heat
the only thing between, so sweet
as we spin fast and then slow
something that began long ago.

The map quivers beneath his careful touch,
oh! How his lips are like a feathered brush.
I have been wanting, waiting for this
untamed electricity mixed with rapture's kiss.

He presses on, further, raptures bliss,
overflow worthy of tender reminisce.
A yearning quenched, satisfying emotions in tow
illuminating the night with an unforgettable glow.  


 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A very sensual write dne tastefully and with the pen of love and passion...:)

[Aramey]

Thank you. That's exactly what I was going for here :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nice and well written...:)

[Steve]

Ummmmmmm. Very nice! I'm speechless.

[Aramey]

lol, glad you liked it :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Love the rhyme, the structure and it is a stunnning write. it is an amazing, write I enjoy :) thanks for sharing.

[Aramey]

Thank you for the comment, glad you enjoyed :)

[Steve]

I did. My imagination did too.

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

I loved how you used how fast some parts rhyme along with the action

[Aramey]

Thank you for taking time out for the comment :) Glad you enjoyed.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Sensational description of the magic love brings to a simple innocent kiss,transforming the memory of its brief existence into a lifelong treasure.

[Aramey]

Thank you! I was trying to describe that sweetness, I'm glad that it comes across that way :)

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

You are welcome, Your poems kindle exquisite emotion in the hearts of the readers. Your smile? Even more so. Thank you for sharing the tender places of the heart.