A Deep Breath

Almost a rant, talking myself out of it. Image source: http://www.glogster.com/emoprincess14/fallen-angels-by-black-veil-brides/g-6l2iohsh5cbj395qrtb6ra0

A deep breath...

tension remembered 

Pain's timely death

crimsons touch, tempered

betrayal, unforgiving... your blatant meth

see the wake of your destruction. SURRENDER!

A body trembling. I am broken and I burned.

How could you do it to me, to her 

How could your meaning be so... useless~ in your words?

You see nothing but water in the tears

nothing but vulnerabilities in their fears...

and whisper beautiful~ illusions in their ears

and when the world crumbled

your castle crashed to the ground

as you tripped, stumbled

and we all heard the echoing sound

A deep breath...

it's over, 

a swift justice now

breathe,

let go.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

Wow...I don't know what this is about but I like it. Good poetry is like that. If one were to come upon a woman in meltdown, completely given in to the moment, would one need to know what drove her to this? I think that comes after. I like this poem.

[Aramey]

Thank you for the feedback :) I know it took me about a year to come up with words to describe what had driven me to this point. Poetry is my favorite way to let things out. Thanks again :)