A Thousand Guiding Stars

This is dedicated to Varun, my valentine :D Image source: http://freefreshwallpapers.com/hd-3d-wallpapers-free-download/3d-fire-heart-black-wide-walls/

My eyes adjust to the coming dawn

The light that dances, spiraling through the shadows there

standing as if I am a newborn fawn

why is it that the words escape me, to describe the air?

I would have laid here broken for an eternity

just to breathe you in

moisture crowds the freckles on my cheek

now I understand... how to begin.

You have defied destiny's sullen song

a lost piece to the puzzle, my wandering heart

it was being within your arms I was missing... all along

I pray of a thousand guiding stars, shall we ever be apart. 

 

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

Wonderful word choice and rhyme scheme. A beautiful sentiment, and a lovely write.

[serpent]

Lucky bloke for whom this one's been penned! It's simplistic beauty creates a different scenery every time I read it and I sure as hell didn't see the guiding stars in any of the sceneries... aint no getting apart for you guys!

[D.C.]

Very nice.