The Picture

If light was mixed with light.

No one could've borne that dazzling bright.

If darkness mixed with darkness,

 It would be blind black hole. 

The Gatherer mixed the light with the darkness,

So it became most beautiful picture,

Called the universe.

Reviews

[nefalnumair]

Short but fascinating. Love the idea. Great work!

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful. I liked it. It was short yet it had its own depth in it

[Abdur-Rehman Qadeer]

thanku... stay blessed

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Impassioned lines!
Universe is the most brightest creation of Lord!
The flow of the poem is flawless..
Kudos!

[Abdur-Rehman Qadeer]

yeah truly... thanks a lot bro :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Hey, I'm a girl!
Well, ok
You're very welcome!
Looking forward to read more of your poems.

[Abdur-Rehman Qadeer]

oh sorry :p and yeah sure... these are two more of my poems....... dear friend :)

[lua]

these words create such beautiful imagery - such an intriguing poem

[Abdur-Rehman Qadeer]

thank you so much dear :)

[Abdur-Rehman Qadeer]

I read ur poems... those are also very amazing