Blind

We fail to open our eyes and see the real beauty of life.

There are times in life which you must ''live for the moment''.
Sometimes, living for the moment, just brings down the whole special moment altogether.
We as individuals , decide for ourselves whether we want that short moment which may never happen again, or fight for something even better, long time happyness.
By our own sins, we are blind and all fail to see sometimes, the real beauty in life.
Sure, you live once, but does that prevent you from maybe having some long term happyness?
Each one of us is capable of being able to give or recieve love, but when stepping up to the bigger picture, you have do both.
Without giving, how will they feel loved?
Without recieving, how will you feel loved?
Beyond what the real beauty is and choose to ignore , only then the tears come after the laughter.
Hell, some people are blinded by themselves, and decept people.
Some people think they will get away with a number of live for the moments, this makes them blind to what true happyness is. True happyness is something you have for a long time, and even when it is gone, you still hold it close and dear to you.
Only if you open your eyes to the real world, and not what you want the real to be, is when you can see what reality is. For when you accept you have made mistakes, only then you can pursue forward.
Holding back , means you will never real accept and move on. It only makes you more blind as you start to avoid the inevitable.
If a man loves a woman, does he not shower her with complete love ? does he not worship and treasure the ground she walks on? does he need give his own heart, so that she won't suffer?
Sure, you don't have to agree with me, but does is not make some sense to you?
Some people completely become blindsinded , and all together deny and avoid the true beauty, maybe because they are afraid. Everyone is born afriad, only some of us are brave enough to face our fears.
I am going slightly off tanjent right about here, but here comes the moral of the story.
One day , you look back and think to yourself, why? sometimes living for the moment whilst having the beauty in front of you all along, can really leave you falling behind...and it is going to take a long time before someone helps you get back on your feet, so don't be blind.

Open your eyes and accept.
The end.

Reviews

[Ben Taylor]

This is a beautiful sentiment you have tried to express, but the number of grammatical/spelling mistakes makes it extremely difficult to read and understand.
This really, REALLY needs to be edited and fixed up.
Nice start though.