Good Girl Rover

Good Girl-
sit.

Good Girl-
shake.

Good Girl-
stay.

Good Girl-
come here.

Good Girl-
lay down.

Good Girl-
roll over.

Good Girl-
do as I say.

Good Girl Rover-
don't ever change.

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

This was funny. At first I thought it was a dark poem of submission. Then right at the end the twist. Very good. This has been listed in last 20 in the contest. Finalists are not yet decided.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Open the door to questions. Better to do what is right. Can't always follow direction. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AMMD]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for entering my little contest.
I cannot comment now as this would be unfair to other entries.
i shall return after the contest is over.
Best regards.
Clive.

[stars are far]

I hate being a "good girl" though i am, but i hate it ,the way you portrayed it is like a good girl must obey everyone..
well done though

[Vidya Bacchus]

I guess I see this like people always expecting you to do as they say as if they control your life.Although I could be wrong and it could actually be about a do g lol

[AMMD]

I had at least three meanings in mind when I wrote it, and yes, that's one :)

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

love it!

i saw it as bein' how people will just do whatever you want, ignorant people.. It has a personal meaning to me- so YAY!!!
gooooooddd jobb!!!

[Silvario]

lol. nice! ok, im not certain if this had an underlying meaning or not. however, being a dog trainer, i found it rather amusing. i really enjoyed it :)