An All Encompassing Freedom

Clean fish
striving upstream
to regenerate
the cycle
of pungent air
translucent drops
of life
being exhaled
a silently
arduous journey
ever propagating
the ebb
and flow
of the
concurrent current
a peaceful
rumbling
with energy
freshly taking
and giving
like the breath
of the trees
hills hugging
the little waves
in an all
encompassing
freedom

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

swimming upstream against the concurrent current...not the easy way...and it might single us out
as rebels, as not fitting in....I have not fit in for a large part of my life.....at least in my mind.
I have felt like one of these fish, only one out of water.
Yes, swimming against the current, there is a certain symmetry and freedom to that.
j.

[AMMD]

I’ve always loved observing the way experience shapes experience, including interpretation of written works. Perspective is part of what makes art beautiful. Thank you

[John the Baptist]

A very nice look at nature here. Very refreshing, considering all the bad news we keep hearing about the environment.

[AMMD]

Thank you for the feedback. It was a truly beautiful experience and scene

[Red Brick Keshner]

A bliss filled and flowing freedom! Such is one to aspire to. Thanks for sharing this quite elevating poem.

[AMMD]

The synergy was visceral. Surpassed only by watching my little one take it all in. Thank you and hoping you’re enjoying the weekend