A Meditation on the Sublime

Kindness isn’t a day
it’s a way of life
a choice
come what may
not to castigate
or stagnate
water flowing best
Kubla Khan
isn’t for all
Coleridge not a felon
common sense
alone teaches that
though the sublime
does seem trite
through the arrogance
of Wordsworth
and over edit
of T.S. Eliot
There’s something
real about authentic
and
raw about talent

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

I like the way it flows.
The poem whispered to my here in the first and second line that "We should be kind always" and in the last four lines that, "nothing can be subtitle for authenticity and raw talent".

Keep the pen writing, poet.
It's a good one.

[AMMD]

Thank you my friend and happy Thursday

[Sami Khalil]

Very true and well said dear poet. Honesty and truth go hand in hand. Confidence and humbleness go hand in hand.
Good style of penning.

[AMMD]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[John the Baptist]

In what way was Wordsworth arrogant?

[AMMD]

Simple answer is that art is subjective