Give Me Passion

Give Me Passion

The anticipation of the night ahead

Feeds the fantasies in my head

Envisioning a night of steam, dirty talks and straps on the scene 

I imagine his strong hold

And I sense his body warmth 

Like fire burning woods

Is my desire to feel him through

I expected fireworks 

But instead he is a cold storm

His words made me dream

In my illusion I would scream

Shattered by another dry spell

Yet another total fail

Yearning to meet my match

Longing for the perfect touch.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

I really enjoyed this poem. Nice work Ambra :)
-QuanaWana

[ron]

Reality often falls short of our fantasies.
I'm sorry your has to.
I know one day you will find the one that makes every dream and all your imaginations come true.

[Ambra Celeste]

At least when fantasies come true you can really appreciate it. :))

[ron]

I have yet to have mine come true. I have been promised they will though. :))
Yes those of us who have yet to have them fulfilled will appreciate them when they are filled.

[livetowrite]

aw cant beat a bit passion in our life's and you captured it beautifully. please feel free to look at some of my work sometime x

[Ambra Celeste]

Thanks Emma for your review.

[The Notorious Thug]

I really like your poem. It was really good. ;)

[Ambra Celeste]

Thanks for leaving your comment.

[MagicAl]

Really enjoyed this..great little poem full of suspense, passion and longing.

[Ambra Celeste]

Thanks MagicAl. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

all of the dreams, all the imagination...longing for the perfect touch...expecting fire and getting ice.

which way will the world end, according to frost?

well, sometimes relationships end before they begin...when it is ice we get instead of fire.

[Ambra Celeste]

Yes at times it is a real disappointment especially when hopes are raised high and expectation is built on illusion.