Criminal Mind

Criminal Mind

You are my chosen one, you are the right one

All your cravings I will fulfill and entice you to my will 

I'll be patient and charm your soul 

I will love you beyond control 

Your desires are my commands, I will lead you to a sinful land 

Your insecurities are my strength, your loneliness is the perfect set

I will lure you and cage you in, you'll never guess what's there to see

You were my Goddess you are now my slave, the illusion is over, you have no escape

I know you will not leave, your fear will keep you still

You are not the first one, nor you'll be the last one.

Reviews

[ron]

Interesting poem about how one becomes a willing slave to another without realizing it.
And how the "owner" collects those under them.

I kind of like how it flips mid stride in the poem. Nicely written.

[Ambra Celeste]

Luring is the art of predators.

[ron]

I guess a predator would have to be good at luring their prey.