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9-24-08

I keep things burried away,

my stories out of site

till I read or see

from you vicariously.

Only one line here

and another there

or just the day as it sits;

waiting for me, telling me:

today is a day you remember.

Then quick as I can

I shut the book and look away.

I think of the great things

I have instead.

But you know,

youre the one that told me,

you were here, and I with you,

and by the pangs

today is a day I remember.

Reviews

[Dms]

Your work seems a bit nostalgic. The general flow is good, and I'd like to see more.