Solitude

Peering into the vastness
That of the unknown
Each step takes more courage
To discover things alone

The horizon is grey but vibrant
Alive with earth's solemn glow
Looking back upon the wreckage
That cut him off from home

Each step takes him forward
Into the eternal beach of dust
Boulders, hills, and craters
Nothing there to trust

Life is non-existent
Not a single moving thing
A place for introspection
To see what others have seen

For its not the moon that's lonely
That is just his soul
Filling his life with trivial things
That will never make him whole

Now there's nothing but truth
To himself he can not lie
For all the things he yearned for
He pushed his friends aside

Missing those he left behind
Due to choices that he made
For its only him now
On his voyage soon to fade

Author's Note

All reviews welcome

Reviews

[pumpkin head]

Hey this is really good, simply love how you rhyme your words so uniquely
Awesome writing skills : )

[....]

ever so wonderful, I enjoyed reading this write.

[Veronica Nicole]

This is beautiful.

[n8adamczak]

Thank you, thats nice to hear

[Whales]

Nice poem. I really liked the nature you put in it. Great way to describe something so lonely.

[n8adamczak]

Thanks, i appreciate the review