Intrusively Yours

This too is love....

I long to rip out your heart
as it throbs and beats
touch its pulsing meat

I want to peel your skin
Wrap myself in it
Feel your heat from within

I'd love to blade your veins
bleed each lumen out
fill it up with my pain

I wish to be your moan
echo in your vesicles
the hollows of your bones

I need to slice your womb
choke it with my seed
seal it shut like a tomb

I yearn to suck your brain
savor all your thoughts
make you go insane

I look to pierce your eyes
blind you with my love
be your only true sunrise

I aim to be your demise
to be the last one you see
So you sleep forever in me

Author's Note

Randomly rhymed....

Please enjoy ....☺

Reviews

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Loving the vicious tone throughout this one, AJ......it's the kind of brilliant realism I could certainly inflict on some certain hapless a******s. Ohhh, to rip their pitiful faces off with my bare hands! Wouldn't that be "quiet" fun! Lolololololol You really hit the nail on the head with this one. Romantic in its own way and bristling with wonderful imagery and murderous intent. Now...can i borrow that hammer?.....some useless skulls need cracking! Great piece!

[AJNJ]

I get into these moods myself sometimes lol. Many a wretches could be skinned alive.
Thank you sir Brilliance for such a lively review!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Not sure if I was hearing from Romeo or Jack the Ripper.
As I've said many times before, you are a unique poet whose posts often starkly
express unpredictable creativity.
Quite a read, AJ!

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton dear sir! Truly appreciated!

[Anastasia]

What I like about this poem is the honesty with which you write. This seems like peek into the mindset of a psycho and this is how obsessed lovers must love, especially those who murder their beloveds if its a case of infructuous love. However, a case can be made here for the depths and intensity of love and the poet may just be trying to desperately convey how much they want to be one with their object of affection. All in all, this poem was interesting with your chosen words leading me down to many layers of feelings. Nice poetry. Thanks.

[AJNJ]

Thank you for such an in-depth interpretation of this piece, Ms. Sabrina. So much read into these words. Appreciated very much.

[Dave Brown]

Glad I am male and I'm really too old to make all that sucking and slicing etc. worthwhile
Excellent image-too funny

[AJNJ]

Actually, this was for my cookery class 🤣 Thank you for stopping by. Appreciated very much!

[Vari]

Random yet made me fandom. I came across with a poem simple yet a multitude of emotions filled within. Nicely penned poem. Passionate lover who wish to steal every moment of lover with himself. He want to make someone special feel "I am there with you. I am all around you. You are surrounded by me. You can feel my presence anywhere you go." Glad to read this.

[AJNJ]

I am so happy and delighted by your review, dear Vari, as you got the feeling behind this poem so well. Thanks many tons to you! God bless you 🤗

[Vari]

Pleasure to review this masterpiece AJ :)

[T.S. Ulmus]

I love this piece! It's so delightfully creepy in its honesty. It reads very smoothly also. You managed to capture a very complex set of emotions, that's no easy feat, but I already knew you were a talented poet.

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton for appreciating this twisted piece dear sir! Love has many facets lol.

[Marina]

Such a murderous love, AJNJ, a befitting theme for the Halloween festival, too. Your poem is both at once gruesome and creatively romantic; you would love nothing more than to submit her to all these trials of suffering just so you could slip inside her being and truly become one with her. It's almost a Dracula kind of love and despite its blood splattering effect, your true intentions and feelings shine through. It's a very, very original way to display your love for another poetically, so well done for the sheer creativity of this poem and description and "splattering" of offbeat rhyme that works so very well here. I hope it's a Happy Halloween and not a Michael Myers version for you! 💛

[AJNJ]

Halloween has indeed inspired the darker side of me but I must admit I feel a teeny-weeny but possessive about a lady sometimes lol. I dare not generalize and say everyone does. Just me. I'm very grateful for your understanding the feelings underlying this poem. All in good fun! Thanks a ton and an ocean!

[AJNJ]

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[Chris Shaw]

Dear AJ, you seem to have a little bit of Halloweeny left in you. Love eh? Can't be defined. This was sheer torture. You want to eat her don'tca. Pure unadultered passion in writing. This dame has really gotten into you in a gruesome way. I liked the random rhymes here, they worked well. Description was deliciously gory. Now a little chianti to finish. Have a great day my friend.

Chris

[AJNJ]

I loved that you enjoyed this poem, dear Ms.Chrs! Yes, she turns my creepy side on and I love it 🤣 Thanks a ton for enjoying and laughing with me! Enjoy the chianti and the Sunday! * Smiling & Waving Fondly*

[Chris Shaw]

I sincerely hope AJ, she also has a wickedly dark side for your sake:)) Smiling and waving back.

[AJNJ]

Oh luckily for me, she does Ms. Chris! She's just laughed reading it lol! Cheers! 🤗🥂

[Chris Shaw]

Then you are perfickly suited :)