Great write, AJNJ! I believe your poem status line says so much.....when our past mistakes and regrets haunt our lives, just where can we run to? There is no place to run to and hide from the ghosts of our past. I think the best we can do is make peace within ourselves and try and shut out the clanking chains of such ghosts; we can't change the past but we can determine our future. This is a very timely, spooky poem, very fitting for Halloween but also being so much more than just that; it being a very relevant question of our lives and how we live with the mistakes we have made. You have addressed this moral question in a very creative way and in flawless structural poesy. An excellent read and write. 💛
Ms. Marina....what do I say, what gratitude i feel within 🤗 You've been such a great friend ever .. read moreMs. Marina....what do I say, what gratitude i feel within 🤗 You've been such a great friend ever since you joined. Thank you for encouraging my efforts always. Thanks a ton and an ocean! You're as awesome as you are beautiful! Happy Halloween 🎃🌹
4 Years Ago
An ocean! Very timely comment. Athens was hit with a tsunami this morning and the ocean swept throug.. read moreAn ocean! Very timely comment. Athens was hit with a tsunami this morning and the ocean swept through. Literally!
4 Years Ago
Awww.....Silly me! I hope you're safe, Ms. Marina. Please find a safe place at a height! Sending you.. read moreAwww.....Silly me! I hope you're safe, Ms. Marina. Please find a safe place at a height! Sending you loads of safety vibes! 🙋♂️
Very nice flow of thoughts and some wisdom shared. Sometime we must run, sometime we must sneak out the back door. Those past mistake can become very heavy. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Indeed sir, anyplace to run and hide from them! Thanks a ton for such a great review!
ahahahaha ... yes indeed how they live on inside our walls ... those past mistakes ... great read for me! i really like the 8/6 form .. very natural rhythm to it .. i like this a lot AJN ..thanks for sharing!
E.I
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
I keep changing homes but I never seem to get rid of them Haha. Thanks a ton for such encouraging wo.. read moreI keep changing homes but I never seem to get rid of them Haha. Thanks a ton for such encouraging words, dear sir 🤗
Great write, AJNJ! I believe your poem status line says so much.....when our past mistakes and regrets haunt our lives, just where can we run to? There is no place to run to and hide from the ghosts of our past. I think the best we can do is make peace within ourselves and try and shut out the clanking chains of such ghosts; we can't change the past but we can determine our future. This is a very timely, spooky poem, very fitting for Halloween but also being so much more than just that; it being a very relevant question of our lives and how we live with the mistakes we have made. You have addressed this moral question in a very creative way and in flawless structural poesy. An excellent read and write. 💛
Ms. Marina....what do I say, what gratitude i feel within 🤗 You've been such a great friend ever .. read moreMs. Marina....what do I say, what gratitude i feel within 🤗 You've been such a great friend ever since you joined. Thank you for encouraging my efforts always. Thanks a ton and an ocean! You're as awesome as you are beautiful! Happy Halloween 🎃🌹
4 Years Ago
An ocean! Very timely comment. Athens was hit with a tsunami this morning and the ocean swept throug.. read moreAn ocean! Very timely comment. Athens was hit with a tsunami this morning and the ocean swept through. Literally!
4 Years Ago
Awww.....Silly me! I hope you're safe, Ms. Marina. Please find a safe place at a height! Sending you.. read moreAwww.....Silly me! I hope you're safe, Ms. Marina. Please find a safe place at a height! Sending you loads of safety vibes! 🙋♂️