Great write, AJNJ! I believe your poem status line says so much.....when our past mistakes and regrets haunt our lives, just where can we run to? There is no place to run to and hide from the ghosts of our past. I think the best we can do is make peace within ourselves and try and shut out the clanking chains of such ghosts; we can't change the past but we can determine our future. This is a very timely, spooky poem, very fitting for Halloween but also being so much more than just that; it being a very relevant question of our lives and how we live with the mistakes we have made. You have addressed this moral question in a very creative way and in flawless structural poesy. An excellent read and write. 💛
Ms. Marina....what do I say, what gratitude i feel within 🤗 You've been such a great friend ever .. read moreMs. Marina....what do I say, what gratitude i feel within 🤗 You've been such a great friend ever since you joined. Thank you for encouraging my efforts always. Thanks a ton and an ocean! You're as awesome as you are beautiful! Happy Halloween 🎃🌹
4 Years Ago
An ocean! Very timely comment. Athens was hit with a tsunami this morning and the ocean swept throug.. read moreAn ocean! Very timely comment. Athens was hit with a tsunami this morning and the ocean swept through. Literally!
4 Years Ago
Awww.....Silly me! I hope you're safe, Ms. Marina. Please find a safe place at a height! Sending you.. read moreAwww.....Silly me! I hope you're safe, Ms. Marina. Please find a safe place at a height! Sending you loads of safety vibes! 🙋♂️
An era has passed since you wrote this and now you have run away from the cafe spotlight. What a tiger you were once but I guess too good to be on such sights. Nothing can do justice to you and your talent.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thank you Ms. Divya. If I have you and your affection then I need nothing more.😎
1 Year Ago
You certainly and most absolutely have it. Welcome always AJ.
Great write, AJ!!! I love your abstract way of describing the skeletons in the person's closet. I have a few too many myself, Lol. So colorfully written!!!
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Nix ❤️️
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
I am floored by such fantastic feedback! Thanks a ton lovely Ms. Nix :)))))))
I really enjoyed this spooky Halloween poem. Halloween is indeed a time for fear and whatever monster you can dig out. A timely writing. Just don't forget the dead...they might return to prove their existence in the other world...
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3 Years Ago
I'm waiting to interview them about my prospects on the other side lol. How have you been dear sir? .. read moreI'm waiting to interview them about my prospects on the other side lol. How have you been dear sir? Thanks a ton for the great review :)
3 Years Ago
I am doing fine. Keeping very busy. Just like all of us poets...
You scared me ..lol . i am a ghost myself but a friendly one so i too wanna run ..
nice one it is .
:)
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Hi Ankita! Where have you been? Indeed ghosting on all of us! .used you around. Have you you writte.. read moreHi Ankita! Where have you been? Indeed ghosting on all of us! .used you around. Have you you written anything new. Do share. Thanks a ton for liking this piece. :)
4 Years Ago
Hey there ! I have been kinda stuck ..i am a trouble person i suppose .lol... missed being here ..yo.. read moreHey there ! I have been kinda stuck ..i am a trouble person i suppose .lol... missed being here ..your welcome though ..and i have posted something new yeah .. u can go check ..read the latest ..i need criticism on that one it's my first story lol ..how hae you been ?
This is great! And quite scary, just as scary as running from our mistakes! Our regrets are one of the most painful and haunting things, and while this fit for Halloween, you wrote something much scarier than just vampire and zombies. Something must more honest and truthful. This fits with any fears we have, and I loved that very much about it. Each word you picked fit so well, and it made it all the better.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Our mistakes become ogres and follow us sometimes. This is very real and happened to me dear Colaca.. read moreOur mistakes become ogres and follow us sometimes. This is very real and happened to me dear Colacat. Thanks a ton for the insightful comments.
nothing more scarier
than those demons
haunting and setting
up house in our minds
making their dark presence
ever known , not letting
you forget any and all past
transgressions..making
us live them again and
and again ..and we can
never run away however
hard w e try..
nice w ork AJ
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Indeed, they make us live them again and go through through those horrors again and again. Thanks a .. read moreIndeed, they make us live them again and go through through those horrors again and again. Thanks a ton for putting it so beautifully, Ms. Fran.