Words In The Wind

“Between what is said and not meant, and what is meant and not said, most of love is lost” ~ Kahlil Gibran

And yet some words

That were meant to rain

Burdened the air

In circling eddies of pain

Just when the earth was

Ready for a shower

And the cuckoo crooned

Every day, every hour

Just when long burning soil

Yearned to be doused

With a gentle spray

A dusty draft of wind

swept my words away

And those windswept words

Did form and fade

As silence smudged my lips

Something quietly decayed

The time was so right

So ripe was the season

My words betrayed me

For no real reason

The moment succumbed

Leaving a film of frost

Those words unsaid

Waned and vanished at a cost

For that which was meant

Yet left forever unsaid

A world of love was lost

Author's Note

Just an inspired poem with random rhyme....

Reviews

[.]

A very apt title, Monsieur P. It links extremely well with your attributed quotation by Khalil Gibran. Sometimes there is a fine line between saying the right words or leaving them unsaid. It's a dangerous predicament; the right words can make everything smooth and the wrong words can increase the distance between two people, so which do we choose? Throw caution to the wind and speak our mind or hold our tongue? For as your reference outlines, if we say nothing at all, and never clear the air, much of what existed is lost. I guess it all depends on the situation, summing it all up and choosing the right words at the right time, or for many men like yourself, shutting up completely at the right time! You have painted some lovely imagery to accompany your words and the inspiring quotation and it all comes together very well to illuminate some serious thoughts in one's mind. So kudos for this one, and for taking a snippet of wisdom and spinning it so poetically well. An excellent write from your thinking pen, monsieur P! Much enjoyed, as always.

[AJNJ]

Thank you for the in-depth review Madame. The imagery in this poem is quite run-of-the-mill but I couldn't think up anything else to support this quote. Thanks anyway. I think the unspoken reason behind such voids is an element of ego in such situations. Budding relationships often succumb to it. Whatever the cost, love is sadly lost.
Appreciate your thoughts and words very much. Pen on and keep your poetic flag flying high :)

[emmajoy]

Your chosen quote opens so many doors, Gentility is often what matters. So too is honesty or a lack of hypocrisy or- merely being human and perhaps lack insight into the other.. For me you've made an offering: please feel before responding then, when you have whatever long the pause merely whisper..

[AJNJ]

While all that you said matters much in relationships, insight, perhaps, is the key...If only one knew some things with certainity...
Thanks a lot for a very thoughtful review on this poem, Ms. Emmajoy. Means much.

[emmajoy]

I agree, truly do but.. not everyone has or wants to find that essential ingredient! You are very welcome.. keep safe.

[AJNJ]

Thanks. You too...Take care :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Words, not spoken. Open doors, we need to be closed.
"Those words unsaid
Waned and vanished at a cost
For that which was meant
Yet left forever unsaid
A world of love was lost"
The above lines. I do understand my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[AJNJ]

Thank you so much for appreciating my feelings in this poem sir. It means a lot to be understood by friends.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend. One of the life lessons we will learn often.

[Chris Shaw]

Words or even lack of them can make or break a relationship. I am reminded here how precious they are, and how carefully they should be used. There will be times when what's flashing in our heads remains better unsaid. Thank you for sharing the Kahlil Gibran quote. Wise words. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read. This one one on a serious topic had some interesting imagery and your poetic expression is always first rate. All good wishes.

Chris

[AJNJ]

Your words of support make it very worthwhile. I am happy to be here these days, my friend, where great poets inspire and encourage. This is a great phase and I am trying to make the most of it. I hope it lasts long and I can take great things away from it. Thank you very much. Means a lot.

[Chris Shaw]

Words of encouragement make a huge difference. I have to say I:m pleased to be in this place too at the present time.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Often communication between two people breaks down for one reason or another.
And we are left wondering what happened? Should we have said it and didn't? Should we have not said it and did?
Questions questions questions.
reading this poem reminds me of reading the prolific poet Lyn Lyfshin...
I love her work...and am always amazed how her words never seem superfluous...pretentious...but with fairly common language, she uses it to her best advantage...and the poems are startling...like this.
j.

[AJNJ]

Thanks a lot for such a delightful review sir. It means a lot and every word of yours will inspire me more.

[.]

Quite a fascinating write again, sir. Khalil Gibran is such a well renowned Eastern poet and philosopher that it would be difficult to do his quotations justice but you have performed admirably here in your own words. As one who is often on the receiving end of a mouthful of abuse, my immediate stance is to say that some things ARE best left unsaid. For quite often hurtful words are never indicative of respect and love in the first place. Love in its infancy, of course, that is when all words should be mean't and said for a love to flourish. I guess the value of words unsaid, said or mean't just wanes over the course of time. This is another real thinker's write from your pen, sir, and one well illustrated with vibrant imagery and a cascading flow. Always a pleasure to peruse your words.

[AJNJ]

I totally get every word of what you mean here sir. Thanks a lot for appearing on this page and uplifting me today :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

This poem is so cool. I like the way the thought comes to a logical conclusion about something not done having consequences. An admission is the first step towards finding a remedy.

[AJNJ]

Thanks Ms. Kat. I am grateful for the kind support always.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You've changed nowadays. Can't say for the better Hahahaha ! Stay you.

[Dave Brown]

very nicely done which likely reflects many wanting relationships

[AJNJ]

Thanks a lot for appreciating this poem sir :)

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Love this one!
It's amazingly well written.
The picture was painted clean and clear that in this life, things are too erratic.

[AJNJ]

Thanks a lot for the great review Kay :)

[zainul]

Simple looking poem has marvelous attributes of rhymes,philosophy and beauty.The concept of betrayal of words is amazing but a reality.
Enjoyed your small but beautiful work,Dear Pestonjee.

[AJNJ]

Thank you so much sir. I'm delighted to see you on my page! It's great to know you and read your poetry. Welcome always.

[zainul]

Thank you dear for the honour.I feel guilty for not being able to visit your page before.I am really impressed by the beauty of your work.
I will try to read your other poems soon.
Stay cheerful and safe in the pandemic.

[AJNJ]

Likewise sir. It will be great to bond over poetry :) Cheers!

[gram linski]

to say or not to say that is the question do we bear our souls and risk rejection or keep silent and risk losing every thing, the quote adds to the whole poem and gives it gravitas a deep thinkers fine piece of writing

[AJNJ]

That quote set me thinking...we risk so much at times. It can go either way....Thank you very much sir, for sharing your thoughts on this one. It means a lot.

[gram linski]

my pleasure to read your poem, you're welcome