Let's Collaborate!

I often wish for this :)

Shy girl with the loaded gun
It's time for us to have some fun
I love your words and you love mine
A poem would be oh so fine!

This virtual lane is full of steam
My love is bursting at the seams
So let's just not leave it to fate
Ooh come on girl, let's collaborate

And this is how we should begin
This sweetly soulful ditty of sin
You touch me here, I touch you there

Do hold that pout and flick your hair

 

You know I’m a visual kind of poet

A hot pic of you’d so help this duet

Uff! Show me those bodacious bombs
My bard will bob and chuck his tomb

I know you want us to align

And steal me of my lovely lines

It’s easy if you tease me long

Just smother me in lacy thongs

 

With a waist as pliant as silk twine
Those eyes that slosh with Merlot wine

I’m sure we’ll churn out ballads rich

Just be my sorceress, be my witch

Quick! Pull me down the slippery-slip
Oh! Let me touch those swollen lips

My mockingbird of love doth sing
Oh!  Tie me up in your g-strings

 

So come on babe, let’s coproduce
Our couplets and our songs to spruce

We’ll blow ‘em off, we’ll knock ‘em dead

Let’s collaborate in sinful red!

Author's Note

Just some fun in AABB rhyming scheme :)

Reviews

[M]

This was quite a delight to read. Such a fast paced poem with flawless rhymes and plenty of humour. I could never collaborate with anyone on any art form, personally. It's something we should keep sacred for ourselves and only share the finished outcome with others. Creativity is highly personal in my opinion. I enjoyed this poem, AJNJ. A skillfully written poem.

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton, Ms. Makhabat. I really appreciate the review.

[The Unknown Sith]

I like this.It is a smooth read, indeed.

[AJNJ]

Thank you muchly 😀

[Ayvid N]

There is a certain mastery over humor that only you have. This work is very cool AJ. Why don't you post anything new? It would be lovely.

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton, my lady. I'm quite a fan, in case you haven't realized it yet. 😎

[Tania Mo]

Who's this is so cool. Who were trollin. Love this lmao Aj.

[AJNJ]

Thanks Mo. If you like it, you could meet some marks and Australian dollars for it. 😎

[Tania Mo]

First teach me to rhyme lol.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I smiled from beginning to end. I love the playfulness, the tease, the proposition to write a poem. This was pure fun!

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton for the kind review.

[AJNJ]

Thanks for smiling with me sir. ....Appreciated!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Young man's light-hearted "proposition."
Nicely constructed; well rhymed.
Entertaining read, AJ.

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton. You're missed sir.

[Neville]

Made me chuckle.. and again muchly enjoyed... I'm not one for collaborating myself, but interestingly have written about it a couple of times... Cheers sir :)

[AJNJ]

Delighted we could laugh together :)
Cheers! Thanks for the great review.

[Neville]

My pleasure :)

[Robert Trakofler]

oh what a clever written ruse and how this bunny could not refuse but i'm afraid my lines aren't curves and cause to you to take a abrupt fast swerves:) so i i'll sit this one out...and politely decline and flit no hair cause I'm all fresh out and drink alone my glass of wine:)

[AJNJ]

No problem Mr. Robert. I am sure glad that you visited this poem :) Please enjoy that glass of wine for me. We have something common there. :)

[John the Baptist]

Very clever and unique rhyming in this one. I do believe something other than poetry's on the speaker's mind.

[AJNJ]

If I could say something without saying it...That would be my geatest achievement. Thanks a lot for appreciating the rhyming sir. I am a fan of your wisdom-filled pages. Keep penning for us!