Last Wave to you

Think of a toy of mine, which I never had.
Think of an abettor, who never existed.
Part of me is blaming me for missing you
For missing falling against falling ad nauseam.

You were the one I adore, against everyone
You make me what I became after that,
Boosted, but crouching, searching you in upstream.
All journey, all arrogance, you took away from me.
I tried to get it back but now I want to
Give it all to someone who can have it
Not becoming what I got again.
God brought nymphs of beings to me.
And now I am adjoining them all,
To justice to final stop of all.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

We can't help who we fall in love with. It just happens and to lose all that is a immense hurt. I am a firm believer that you grow stronger from the breaks of life. That last wave is painful,but hopefully you will wave hello to someone new. Lovely lines you have created.

Chris

[7's]

thanks Christine.. it was truly painful..actually seems fun now..
it was written by a new fruit now ripen.. and years later we were freinds...

thanks for your appreciation again

[Chris Shaw]

A happy ending is always good in my opinion :)

[bleeding _ink]

It must have been painful. The way you expressed your feelings is beautiful. I really liked it.