I Brush You Off.

I brush you off

I brush you off for good

I don't want to feel the pain

Leave me

Leave me now

I don't want to be betrayed

I don't want you to betray me once again

I am done with you

I am so done.

 

 

Done is done

Can't change the past

We had a good time

Laughing and hanging out

Now that we're gone

Now that we're gone for good

I am moving on

I am so moving on.

 

 

Never coming back

No, never turning back

Won't get caught

Won't get caught up in your game

I will brush you off

I will brush you off for good.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always. (:

Reviews

[NaomiJim]

It's a good thing I feel when we are able to "brush" something off and move on that has us bound. Another poem in which others can relate to! Well done! :-)

[Winter]

Sometimes goodbyes are second chances and moving on is the right thing to do. I can relate to this poem. Very good pen. Keep your head up. Thankyou for this write.

[Enigma]

I like the strong assertive tone and I can relate to your words only too well, right now. The sad part is that the repeating assertions hint at a sort of inner frailty to do the very thing that you seem so sure of accomplishing.

Good write. I like it.

[Carrion.]

i relate to this so muchhh, legit, i love it.(:

[Coyote Poetry]

"I will brush you off'
I will brush you off for good."
It is good when we learn the bad memories behind. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

Good for you! =) I love the poem! Amazingly written.

[Dayran]

Sounds a little like something written for one's own self and in relation to someone we might feel ourselves one with. Would you take your own guide?

[Ama May Cooper]

Honestly.. its wonderful
the way its written is almost like being inside the head of the author while writing it, travelling through the same emotions, feeling the same progression in a relationship,feeling that reassurance that your better off this way.
The power behind the words within the voice, the final decsion. So powerful.
The repetition in the words, like the same repetion in our minds when we try to convince ourselves of something... Fantastic just fantastic

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

that is awesome! i loved how you double baked on what you say in the line befor it is so good!

[Lily Mae]

Brush off..move on and wear a smile.. :) xo