I Miss You.

I miss you

More than you miss me

I know that for sure

You never text 

You never call

Do you even think about me?

 

 

The way we used to laugh

Is nothing more than a bitter memorie.

 

 

I miss you

I miss you so

Yet I know

You don't miss me.

 

 

I need to lay down

I need to think this through

Do I want to risk evething?
Can I keep my head held high?

Will I get out alive?

 

 

Written By: A Risen Heroine.

Date: 11 of May 2012.

Dedication: Sarah..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Issues.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[NaomiJim]

There is always one point or another in someones life when they wonder if they feel more for someone than what the other feels for them. A lot of people will be able to relate to this poem and the questions within it. Well done. :-)

[Winter]

The question we all have left unanswered is do people remember us like we do them, or love us like we do them. Good write. I ask myself that everyday.

[Allison]

That was pretty good. I like it a lot because I can totally relate to what you're going through and what you've been through. Amazing job!

[CourtneyShay]

wow this is awesome i have these kind of feelings when i think bout people i have lost in death

[Lily Mae]

To me those are the saddest moments.. When you've invested who you are into someone and they vanish as if you never mean't anything to them.. leaving you to question why.. Sometimes we never know and we have to keep moving forward and simply loving the way we do..xo

[Enigma]

Sometimes, its so difficult to move on from something that appeared and felt so perfect and natural once. I guess, the mind keeps going back, aware that its a hopeless situation. Well penned.

[light and ashes]

Nice poem, it really sucks when this happens.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very true write..relatable..

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww. so heartfelt. i feel ya. I miss a lot of people too who don't even talk to me anymore... even though, we used to talk a lot.. -sigh- i feel this poem so much.
THe sorrow is well expressed. I like it. Well done Risen Heroine!!!
I miss reading your work. =)