Arose Within The Ashes Of Mine.

I may have felt love

I may have felt sadness

I may have felt the emptiness,

The loneliness and the longing.

 

 

I am no longer the broken hearted

I am no longer a Fallen

I grew to be A Risen Heroine

The one I wished to be for so long.

 

 

My inside was on fire

Turned to ash

Yet I arose as a phoenix

I arose from my ashes;

Within the orange and red flames

I moved on.

 

 

Never felt the strength

Wander from vein to vein

Kept believing in those lies;

Those lies I've lived on for so long.

 

 

I kept giving in to you

I kept living beneath

The blanket of your beautiful lies.

Author's Note

Ignore Any Grammar Issues. (:
Honest Opinion As Always. (:

Reviews

[APOORVA]

you exactly have written what i can connect to.
beautiful
I may have felt love
I may have felt sadness
I may have felt the emptiness,
The loneliness and the longing.


I am no longer the broken hearted
I am no longer a Fallen
I grew to be A Risen Heroine
The one I wished to be for so long.

[LivingDeath]

You're as strong as the phoenix :P I've known that for a long time old friend.
As strong as the phoenix, and everlasting as the flames that give it life.
Thanks for the read :) Miss talking to you.
Great write
~Death

[A Risen Heroine.]

Thank you so much!
Miss talking to u too :)

[A. Amos]

I kept giving in to you
I kept living beneath
The blanket of your beautiful lies.

This is one interesting write, and the above end was essence of your deep and meaninful poetry.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the third stanza.

[Allycat]

amazing write :) I can relate to this, It's wonderful to finally move on from something that has hurt you for so long.
"My inside was on fire
Turned to ash
Yet I arose as a phoenix
I arose from my ashes;
Within the orange and red flames
I moved on."
Beautiful Job :D

[White_lily]

A really great write :)

[Winter]

Sometimes we chose to see with the blind eye for the one we love. Its understandable. I love this writing. Thankyou.

[Melobldnfr]

Agreed. I particularly like, and can relate to, the last lines "I kept giving in to you / I kept living beneath / The blanket of your beautiful lies." I certainly feel you. Thanks for sharing.

[Balls:)]

I really really liked it.
Beautiful... I feel like i really connected with you

[Tasha]

Lovely transformation.