Burning Desire.

That friday night, as we said "goodnight."

My lips started burning it didn't hurt,

the longing, the touch, the desire,

burned deep within,

I wanted it to happen,

yet I was afraid, afraid that you might think I was wierd,

That you might think I was moving too fast...

Yet as your lips touched my cheek

It started to burn even more

The desire;
Grew more and more irresistible.

 

 

I could hardly resist

The desire burned right beneath the skin

I was above the skies

In your arms I was safe

No harm

All i felt was love

Love that i wished for

Love I wished for you too feel aswell.


Written By: A Fallen Heroine.
Date: 19th of January 2012.
Dedication: Mads. <3

Author's Note

Ignore Any Grammar issues.
Honest Opinino As Always.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Yearningful and lamentful!
The heart is shown in so many colours here, amazing xoxo

Beautiful. full of emotion and heated passion.

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Err, I like the passion, love and pure desire in this poem. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing another great write.

...Layla...

[The old me]

nicely done

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Beautiful write of passion and love!! Very well correponding to the flow as it's written! I love it a thousand fold! Well don, well done!!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Lovely and full of passion!!! I love this! =D You express your feelings sooo well. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

When we open new door of desire and love. Help close the old one's. I like the the story in this poem. A very good flow of words and I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Andrea Vargas]

This is a very intricate piece you convey the need with a desire that I find perfect, and the need for the other to express the same amount of emotion that seems critical, perfect!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was nicely written. I think anyone could have that burning desire to have someone they love in their arms or pulled into a kiss. I liked this poem. I could relate to it. Thanks for sharing.