Another Sorrow, My Heart Was Breaking, You Were My Hero.

This life you've been taking
Lead me into Another sorrow
You didn't see My heart was breaking
Thought You were my hero.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Issues.
Honest Opinion As Always~
Notice the words I made a line beneath...

Reviews

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Damn. Thoughts, I so hate them. It hurts a lot sometimes. Great short poem.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Short, powerful, a burning ingravement within. Striking me down to your state, I see what we all can feel, and that our hero's can be our enemies all too quickly. Very astonishing.

[Coyote Poetry]

In four lines. A complete and powerful poem. When people let us down. Can break our hearts. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[nevermindfan1991]

Short, packed with emotion, and to the point. Impressive!

[FallenHeroXx]

Write me 'bout this?

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific emotional and intense poem...