Where Has Forever Gone Now?

Jacob broke up with me..

You promised me forever

Where has forever gone now?

 

 

I can't sleep

Memories haunt me

Everytime I see your smile,

Hear you laugh,
I cry...

Cry my eyes out

Knowing you won't come back
To pick up the pieces..

 

 

I walk alone

Even in the crowd I'm on my own

Beyond my dearest front

My heart's bleeding..

 

 

No one to save me

Walking around restless

Like an unholy zombie..

 

 

I'm standing on the edge

Screaming your name

Begging you to come save me

From my inner dark..

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine
Date: 30th og December 2012
Dedication: Jacob...

Author's Note

Ignore Any grammar issues...
Honest Opinion As Always...

Yeah as you might have figured out... He Left me Bleeding..

Reviews

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Never give up!
A sad write to the world, of pain and sorrow...Inside, we are the same, dear, and inside I feel the hurt and angst...Always here for you...And words cannot describe what I wish to say...Will a big bear hug? Maybe.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and powerful poem. Hard to see good when sadness is all around us. Description create a sad situation needing a new beginning. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

This was so hurting yet amazing
it wa your best till.now :-P
Keep that up

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Oh my goodness, this is definitely a sad write. I can relate to it very well. Lovely poem.

[ClockWork GRIMM]

Ehh... Not your best but still enjoyable nonetheless...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Truly sad when things like these happen...
forever should mean forever (barring exceptional circumastances)...in my book it does...
but not all subscribe to that notion; sadly...

Great poem...

[CherryBomb]

Aww, this is so touching! Very relatable! Feel better

[Desmund Tiny]

I can relate to this poem.... it made me cry with the loneliness felt here... life is all about losing and gaining happiness and sadness... not all promises last ... T.T