Does It Flow In Your Blood?

It flows in your blood

We can't stop it

You can't help it

The ones you love;

Will get hurt

The ones you love;

Can't do anything

Anything but get hurt.

　

 

Does it really flow in your blood?
To hurt and betray the ones you love?

Do you really enjoy hurting others?

Tell the truth, 'cause this hurt.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You asked a good questions in this poem. Good to know the person you desire to be with. Past history will be repeated. I like the strong questions in the poem. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Ouch is right. The owrds flow forth, with what feels like livid and raw anger and betrayal, and I know for a fact that emotions drawn out, hurt. Even if it's the words we once said ourselves, they still hurt when thrown back at us. Great write! Powerful and never-ending.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ouch. This is quite intense. But really good! =D Great write girl!! =)

[Calypso]

Reading this makes me think of a few things. Mostly how standing up for yourself can hurt others. They become angry when you say anything and then you feel like you've hurt them, but then again I think of addiction, but I have no clue why.

[Dezzyray]

it's really intense and scary in a way but really liked this

[stars are far]

This was well done
and the subject you wrote about is really nice, i mean many's hurt but they dont mean to,maybe it run in their blood :)
great write

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Sometimes 'blood' has a lot to answer for, I often think about the inherent nature of behavior...very fascinating I find....